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Fic: Family Obligations, Chapter 3
Title: Family Obligations, Chapter 3
Author: AngiePen
Fandom: Celebrity RPS
Pairing: Orlando Bloom/Sean Bean
Rating: R
Challenge: AU Orlibean. Sean is hired to kidnap Orlando who he assumes is a spoiled rich kid who turns out to be anything but, when the ransom isn't paid the order comes down for Sean to kill him. It's a race against time to get them both to safety. Written for [info]amygirl's request at [info]the_challenger.
Summary: Sean's little brother has a taste for the ponies but no talent when it comes to choosing winners, and owes a local gangster a lot more money than he can come up with. Sean agrees to do an "easy job" in payment of the debt -- kidnapping a spoiled young punk named Bloom and hanging on to him while the gangster gets a ransom from the lad's family. It should've been a simple job, but then things started to get complicated.
Disclaimer: I don't own anyone you recognize. I know nothing about their social lives or sexual activities, more's the pity. This is fiction, period. It is done as a labor of love and I make no money from it.

Previous Chapters: One, Two



The Bloom kid was still sleeping a lot, curled up in his chair with one wrist dangling from the pipe. Sean kept waking him up every two or three hours, made sure he was reasonably lucid and fed him more aspirin if he seemed to be in pain. By dinner time the lad was feeling hungry again, which Sean took as a good sign. Likely it was the hangover wearing off, leaving just the concussion.

He still needed steadying as well as guiding on trips to the loo and Sean figured that'd probably last a few days yet; the one time in a brawl he'd gotten hit in the head hard enough to go to a doctor he'd been dizzy on and off for nearly a week. The doctor hadn't wanted to keep him in hospital, though -- he'd just prescribed some pills to help with the dizziness some. Bloom wasn't doing a whole lot of walking and whenever he did, Sean was right there to hold him up, so he figured -- was hoping really hard, truth to tell -- that just riding it out without any actual medical attention wouldn't hurt the lad any.

Sean cooked up some noodles and mixed in a can of tuna. His mum had always melted cheese on top when she'd made this sort of dish but the cheddar in the fridge didn't look too good. He eyed it dubiously, then found a knife in a drawer and cut the block in half. It looked just fine on the inside and when he sniffed it, it smelled... well, cheesy. Pretty strong, but he'd always liked strong cheese anyway.

He shrugged and sliced off the greening outer edges, then cut up the middle and tossed it on top before putting the whole mess into the oven. It still didn't look quite like what his mum made, but it should be edible.

When it was done -- that is, when the cheese had melted -- he dished some up into a bowl, grabbed a spoon and a tea towel and brought it all over to Bloom's chair. He shook the lad awake, then spread the towel on his lap, set the bowl on it and put the spoon into his free hand. "I thought you might want to feed yourself this time," he muttered, looking away. He'd fed the lad his beans earlier, one forkful at a time, but he seemed to be feeling better now and Sean wouldn't have wanted anyone feeding him like a baby any longer than necessary. The kid nodded thanks and poked awkwardly at the bowl in his lap. Sean left him to it, figuring he'd get it with practice.

He filled his own bowl and sat at the small table, facing the lad's chair so he could keep an eye on him.

What he saw made him wince more than once. Obviously blind folks had some sort of trick to it, or got some training or whatever. And of course, most of them had two hands to work with. By the time Sean was done with his own food -- and he ate faster as he got closer to finishing -- most of the Bloom kid's dinner had fallen down onto his shirt or into the tea towel on his lap.

Sean set aside his own bowl and dragged his chair over next to the lad. "I'm sorry," he muttered, feeling some need to apologize for whatever reason. "I thought ye'd rather do it yourself but this isn't working too well, is it?" He took the spoon out of the boy's hand and worked on scraping what was salvageable back into the bowl.

"I'm sorry. I tried, I really did, I just can't quite manage it." The lad was all but whispering and seemed ashamed of his failure to feed himself. His shoulders were hunched up as though he expected Sean to smack him for it.

"It's all right, don't worry over it." Sean patted him awkwardly on the arm, then wiped his greasy hand off on his trousers. "Here, open up." He spooned some noodles and cheese into the boy's mouth, then waited while he chewed and swallowed.

"Thank you," the lad said, in between bites. "It's quite good."

Sean snorted and shoveled in another spoonful. "It's tasteless dreck, is what it is, but it's filling and it's better than beans again." There wasn't exactly a wide selection of food, much less of seasonings. Sean wasn't exactly a fancy cook but even his own bachelor skills were limited by the barren kitchen.

The kid swallowed and gave him a sort of half smile. "Maybe I'm just really hungry."

"That must be it," Sean agreed. He gave him another mouthful, then added, "They say that hunger is the best spice, yeah? Yeh didn't eat much of the beans and likely hadn't eaten for a while before that, so I guess this is tasting pretty spicy."

The lad made a snorking sound and his head jerked a couple of times. Sean stared at him in alarm, afraid he was choking, but he managed to swallow and then giggled. The light sound made Sean smile in relief.

"Yes, I think it is at that." He smiled up at Sean, sharing the humor. Sean hadn't thought it was all that funny a joke, but the lad's life had been pretty tense lately, likely even frightening, and he supposed that even a bit of a laugh to lighten things up might seem like a huge relief. Or something like that.

When they were done he dumped the dishes in the sink and filled them with water. He'd wash up later but just then he needed to get his charge cleaned up some. He wet down another tea towel, then went back to the easy chair and pulled out the handcuff key.

"I'm going to unlock your arm so I can get your shirt off -- it needs a wash. It's not too cold in here so you should be fine for a bit." The lad nodded and stayed quiet while Sean released him and tugged the soiled T-shirt over his head. He used the towel to wipe up the kid's face and hands, along with a few patches of grease that'd soaked through his shirt onto his chest. The smooth skin under his fingers, even through the damp towel, was, well, distracting. Sean couldn't help thinking what it'd be like to be touching him without the towel between them -- and without a lot of other things between them as well -- but he managed to keep it to himself.

He thought about locking the lad back up when he'd finished, then shrugged and said, "You behave, now. I'll be back in a few." He walked away, over to the bathroom, his footsteps clear on the wooden floors. He stood in front of the sink and ran the water until it was hot, watching out the door all the while. There was a straight view of the boy's chair from the bathroom sink and he'd have known in half a second if he'd tried anything, but he just sat there, not touching his scarf nor even trying to get up. He rubbed his arm and shoulder as though they ached, though. No surprise there -- he was likely feeling pretty stiff after all this time with his arm in one position like that.

When the water heated up, Sean filled the sink and went to work on the shirt with a bar of soap. It didn't suds up all that well but it was good enough to get the worst of the grease off. He rinsed it out and wrung it as best he could, then hung it over the shower curtain to dry.

The washing up still needed to be done so Sean got to it. While moving around the kitchen, he kept an eye on the Bloom kid--

"Hey? Bloom? What's your name anyway?" Sean'd been calling him "Bloom" and "kid" and all in his head ever since Merriwether'd given him the job but it felt odd now. The way he was taking care of the lad reminded him of babysitting for Tommy when he'd been younger, doing all the cooking and washing up because Tommy was too little. Merriwether'd told him the boy's first name but he'd forgot somewhere along the line.

"It's Orlando." Orlando paused and then added, "Sir," when it became clear that Sean still wasn't willing to share his own name.

"Orlando, then. I were just wondering."

Sean went back to the dishes. Orlando. Better than "the Bloom kid" at least.



Later that evening, Sean was back at the table playing solitaire with the fifty-one card deck. Orlando was still sitting curled up in his chair, his arms wrapped around his middle. Sean thought of offering him a blanket but he didn't look cold -- there was no gooseflesh visible and he wasn't shivering -- and the temperature was a mite warm for the season if anything. Rather, he looked like he was just sitting in his own world, silent and dark. Listening, mayhap, waiting to see if Sean would approach him, tell him it was time to do something, move somewhere.

There was no doubt in Sean's mind that the lad -- Orlando -- would do it, too, no matter what he asked of him, whatever he demanded. He'd been quiet and patient and no bother at all, or at least no more than he could help, being blindfolded and stuck in one spot, even if not chained there anymore. If Sean had ever imagined kidnapping anyone, he'd not have thought that the victim would be anywhere near this cooperative.

Tommy sure wouldn't have. Tommy'd been a right handful as a youngster, dashing about and getting into everything, asking endless questions, making messes and breaking things and charging off to the next disaster -- sometimes Sean'd thought the brat did it deliberately, whenever their parents had gone out and left Sean in charge, just for the fun of watching Sean scramble around trying to tend to everything and get it all sorted out before Mum and Da got home.

And yet for all the trouble he'd been, for all the trouble he was now, Sean couldn't imagine wanting to be rid of him. He wasn't a bad lad, even with the gambling and all the related foolishness, even with Sean sitting there in a cottage with a kidnap victim and himself a felon if anyone ever found out about it -- for all that, he still wouldn't want to lose his brother.

So how then could Orlando's family ever want to be rid of him? Or just not want him back enough to be willing to pay whatever was asked? Assuming they could -- maybe that was the problem. Maybe Merriwether thought they'd more money than they did; it was possible they'd had some hard times and were putting on a good show for the look of it but were actually deep in debt themselves.

But Orlando hadn't asked what if his da couldn't pay, he'd asked what if his da didn't want to pay. That was two different things, clearly.

For all Merriwether'd insisted Orlando was a stuck-up little snot, though, Sean hadn't seen it, not a bit. Granted the boy was probably frightened and that could improve anyone's manners, but it was hard to completely hide a truly nasty nature and by now Sean would've expected to've seen some sign of his charge's inner selfishness, some shred of attitude. But he'd not even whined and he'd had more cause than many.

Sean gave the battered deck a last shuffle and set them aside, then sauntered over to the living room. He flopped down on the sofa, making sure the lad could hear him, and said, "So, what's the story, then? Why d'you think your Da won't be wanting to pay to get you back?"

Orlando'd jumped a bit when he heard the sofa cushions wheeze and the frame creak, then settled back down in his chair. He wrapped his arms tighter around himself and brought one hand up so he could chew on a knuckle. He shrugged and said, "We just haven't agreed on very much, not for the last few years."

Sean snorted disbelief. "It takes more than a bit of a disagreement to make a man glad to see the last of his oldest son. And it's not like you're catching a boat for the Antipodes -- my employer's a nasty sort and he's likely to have you killed if he don't get what he wants and he'll certainly let your da know of his intentions. So you're saying he'd let you be murdered rather than part with some cash, all because you've disagreed?"

Orlando shrugged again. He'd pulled his knees up and he wrapped his arms around them and pillowed his scarf-wound head on top. "Some disagreements are larger than others," he murmured, so quietly Sean could barely hear him.

"But what--?"

Just then Sean's mobile beeped, interrupting him. He pulled it out, saw that it was Merriwether and got up to answer it in the bathroom, where he could still keep an eye on Orlando but could speak softly enough that the conversation would be private.

"Yeah?"

Merriwether got right to the point and said, "The family is being difficult. I need a finger to help persuade them."



Orlando had spent the day just sitting and thinking. He wondered what was going to happen to him and thought about how he'd gotten here and whether he could've done anything any differently to have prevented all... all this. Probably not. If the kidnappers just wanted money then whatever'd made them settle on Orlando as a target would likely still've been there, but maybe if he and his father had gotten along, it would've been like his captor had said -- an exchange of cash for Orlando and then all's done.

He had hopes, though, that the man holding him wouldn't kill him, whether the ransom were paid or not. He hadn't been like any kidnapper Orlando had ever imagined, and growing up in a wealthy family he had imagined being kidnapped before, from the time he was very small.

The reality was different, though. He'd been fed and taken care of, and the only damage done him had been caused by Bert, if he could believe a kidnapper. Unfortunately he thought he likely could, since Bert hadn't been terribly polite even when they were negotiating their encounter in the alley.

And how could he disbelieve that voice? He'd hung on his captor's every word, as few as they'd been over the last day, letting that rough-honey voice roll over him, low and dark and intimate. Orlando had some fuzzy memories of being carried and some much clearer memories of a strong arm around him, guiding him and helping him balance when the world lurched and swayed.

He fully realized he was being ridiculous, that the man was a criminal and cared for him only as a commodity to be stolen from his rightful owners and then sold back to them. Except that someone who saw him only as a thing from which to make money would have no reason to hand feed him -- handing him a bowl and telling him to use his fingers if he wanted to eat would've been easier and just as effective. Nor had he any reason to care whether Orlando's face was clean or whether his shirt got washed.

Orlando knew it was stupid but he felt cared for and he couldn't help grasping onto that because it was the only hope he had of getting through this situation alive. Surely the man's employer, whoever he was, couldn't be the sort who'd order someone like Orlando killed in cold blood, not if he were the sort to hire someone like the man who'd been taking care of him? A cold bastard would surround himself with other cold bastards, men who could and would follow whatever orders he gave no matter what. Orlando couldn't believe that of the man who'd brought him here and looked after him so well.

And when he asked why Orlando's father wouldn't want to pay for his return, he'd seemed genuinely puzzled, rather than simply angry as one might expect of someone who was only concerned with whether or not he was going to get his money.

He'd been trying to think how to explain what was really a petty and sordid family matter when he'd heard a phone ring, and then his captor had walked away. A few moments later, a bellowed "Like hell!" echoing across the room made him jump in shock.

Now what?!


Next Chapter: Chapter Four



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[info]timour
2007-05-10 01:56 pm UTC (link)
love it...

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[info]angiepen
2007-05-10 02:06 pm UTC (link)
Thanks! :)

Angie

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[info]dienw
2007-05-10 02:01 pm UTC (link)
Was so excited to see a new chapter. Love how this is going.

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[info]dienw
2007-05-10 02:02 pm UTC (link)
Thought you were already on my flist, but my "old age" brain was wrong. Would you mind if I add you now?

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(no subject) - [info]angiepen, 2007-05-10 02:08 pm UTC (Expand)

[info]ellie_pierson
2007-05-10 02:02 pm UTC (link)
Now this Merriwether guy has gone too far. It's one thing to kidnap Orlando and hold him for ransom, but now he expects Sean to hurt him?? Sean can't do that.

Thanks for the update!

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[info]angiepen
2007-05-10 02:09 pm UTC (link)
Well, Sean's protesting pretty loudly; we'll see how that goes. [duck] Thanks for commenting! :D

Angie

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[info]tati
2007-05-10 02:07 pm UTC (link)
argh!!! *bites nails clean off* surely Sean won't do it? meeeeeeep...

i loved them thinking about each other, and also the care Sean handles Orlando with. i have only one BIG complaint about this fic... why are the chapters so damn short?!

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[info]angiepen
2007-05-10 02:16 pm UTC (link)
He certainly doesn't want to.... :/ It's in a bit of a rough place, though, you know? [ducks]

About the chapter length, ummm, sorry...? [hides] Chapters are as long as they are and if I padded them out they'd feel bloated or boring or uneven. And if I just wrote X number of words and posted that, I would think it'd be even more frustrating since I'd be leaving off in the middle of a scene. (Aside from the fact that X number of words at random, even rounding up to the nearest sentence or paragraph, isn't what a chapter is.) I'm not sure if this is what you're asking, actually, but a chapter is a structural unit and how long it is has more to do with what's happening and where scenes end and which scenes belong in a group together, than they do with length.

Anyway [cough] I'm glad you're enjoying the story enough to want larger chunks of it. :D I'm trying to stick to a three-times-a-week schedule, and if I can manage that then the story should move along fairly quickly. Thanks, hon! [hugz]

Angie

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(no subject) - [info]tati, 2007-05-10 03:52 pm UTC (Expand)

[info]phantomminuet
2007-05-10 02:15 pm UTC (link)
I want you to know that I don't like RPS slash. I just don't. But I'm still reading this story, and it's all. your. fault.

I hope you're happy.

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[info]angiepen
2007-05-10 02:17 pm UTC (link)
Umm, sorry? [grin] And yes, I'm actually very happy. :D Thanks -- I take it as a great compliment that you're reading something you usually don't and apparently enjoying it. [smile/hugz]

Angie

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[info]doylebaby
2007-05-10 02:21 pm UTC (link)
Oh no, this is not good! At least Sean seems inclined to not chop off body parts - anything more than a curl is soooo wrong.

They're both showing each other without knowing, their true characters. Sean in his caring for Orlando and Orlando in his polite, accepting bahaviour.

I sense there's trouble ahead... Anxiously waiting for more!

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[info]angiepen
2007-05-10 02:59 pm UTC (link)
No, Sean is definitely not inclined to chop off body parts. [cough] Whether or not his temporary boss will go along with his lack of inclination is another matter. :/

Thanks, hon! :D

Angie

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[info]jackieville
2007-05-10 02:26 pm UTC (link)
*is very nervous* Awesome story and I cannot wait for more! *bites nails*

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[info]angiepen
2007-05-10 03:00 pm UTC (link)
Thanks, glad you're enjoying! :D

Angie

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[info]belle_lestrange
2007-05-10 02:29 pm UTC (link)
wow i love it and can't wait for more! *hugs you*

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[info]angiepen
2007-05-10 03:00 pm UTC (link)
Thanks, hon! More on Sunday, or at least that's the plan. [crossed fingers]

Angie

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[info]anobtuselife
2007-05-10 02:30 pm UTC (link)
Most happy to see a new chapter! :-)

Looking forward to more!

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[info]angiepen
2007-05-10 03:01 pm UTC (link)
Thanks, I'm glad you're enjoying it. Working on the next chunk!

Angie

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[info]brigantine1
2007-05-10 03:29 pm UTC (link)
Ack! A body part?? What the heck happened to a nice, simple, grab 'n' babysit job? Breach of contract, that's what that is. :(

Not that we didn't suspect nastiness, given the challenge and all, but still. Awfully rude! *settles in happily for the next exciting episode* Hee. *pets the boys*

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[info]angiepen
2007-05-10 04:36 pm UTC (link)
Ack! A body part?? What the heck happened to a nice, simple, grab 'n' babysit job? Breach of contract, that's what that is. :(

That's what's running through Sean's head right now, just about verbatim, LOL! ;)

Thanks, hon! :D

Angie

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[info]lenalove
2007-05-10 03:35 pm UTC (link)
Glad to see you are working on the next "chunk" already. :) So the Northern Bastard is really a big softy at heart, isn't he? I love how you write both characters. There isn't a lot of action, yet it is still completely compelling. I only have one complaint. I hate the word "mayhap". It's rather old fashioned, is it not? Sorry!

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[info]angiepen
2007-05-10 04:40 pm UTC (link)
Well, he's a softy around Orlando at least. :) I'm glad you're into this even though there's not a lot of action -- I've been worrying about that, because we're not going to get really "active" for a bit yet, but there are things going on and I'm glad they're holding your interest. :D

I hate the word "mayhap". It's rather old fashioned, is it not?

It might well be. [duck] I'm trying to give Sean's dialogue a sort of rustic flavor to it, but unfortunately I'm not terribly familiar with how a working class person from Sheffield might actually speak so I'm completely winging it here. I apologize to you and everyone else who knows better for any major blunders I might make on the way. [hides under keyboard]

Angie

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[info]lucky_starre
2007-05-10 03:53 pm UTC (link)
ooh man, NO Sean! haha, this was a great chapter [as usual]. I loove your characers..especially Sean. You do a great job with them. I'm ANXIOUSLY waiting for the next chapter : )

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[info]angiepen
2007-05-10 04:41 pm UTC (link)
Thanks hon -- more Sunday I hope! [hugz]

Angie

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[info]halszka
2007-05-10 05:11 pm UTC (link)
Poor boy, he must very damaged if that kind of polities from Sean give him warm feeling. Poor, poor boy.
Ps. I must say I love him much more when he plays real man (althougt young).

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[info]angiepen
2007-05-10 07:43 pm UTC (link)
Orlando definitely has some issues, yes. [nodnod] And thanks -- I like him more guy-ish too. You can show a man in a position of weakness or afraid or whatever without making him girly and I think that's the trick to it. Thanks for commenting -- I'm glad you're enjoying the story. :)

Angie

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Family Obligations, Chapter 3
[info]willys_digs
2007-05-10 05:14 pm UTC (link)
*shivers*

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Jo

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Re: Family Obligations, Chapter 3
[info]angiepen
2007-05-10 07:43 pm UTC (link)
Thanks. :)

Angie

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[info]amygirl
2007-05-10 06:59 pm UTC (link)
Gah...I love this fic so incredibly much. The slow bonding they've done, that Orlando trusts Sean despite the fact that he kidnapped him and he doesn't know his name and Sean's continued reluctance this is just all sorts of yummy I can't wait to see the next part.

Apparently, according to several fic rants I've read as of late, Orlando-in-Peril fic are cliched and annoying to people but I don't know I enjoy them. Maybe I haven't been in the fandom long enough to get tired of them. So thanks again for humoring me with this one... :-)

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[info]angiepen
2007-05-10 08:51 pm UTC (link)
We must read different ranters [wry smile] 'cause I haven't seen those, but that's all right. I've seen similar rants before, whether it's people who've seen too much of something and are tired of it or have never read something else but are sure they wouldn't like it. To me, though, it's more about the writing than it is about the plotline or plot device per se. I mean, when people rant about how stupid and unrealistic Mpreg is, I link them to Elaine's "Thursday's Child," which is wonderful and incredibly well grounded in medical fact. A good writer can take an incredibly problematic scenario and turn it into an excellent story.

And Orlando-in-Peril isn't even that problematic, really. The only major pitfall built into it is the danger of Orlando turning into a maiden in distress, complete with shrieking in fear, fainting spells and a white hanky. And that's a potential danger in a lot of storylines, not just the ones where Orlando's in trouble, so.... [shrug]

A scenario that's been overdone or done badly in the past can be a challenge to write, but that can be a good reason to do it. :D Taking something problematic and making it work is a "challenge" for a writer, in the true sense of the word.

Not that I was thinking of this story that way, because I've never particularly thought of Orlando In Trouble stories as problematic in and of themselves. But just in general, you know? A good writer can make the dumbest-sounding plotline work and a bad writer can turn the coolest, most original idea in the world into boring drek.

Anyway. [cough]

Thanks for the thoughtful comment. ;) I'm glad you're still enjoying! [hugz]

Angie

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[info]pixiereader
2007-05-10 07:35 pm UTC (link)
love this story and can't wait to see how Sean deals with this, he is obviously not going to chop Orlando's pinky off.

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[info]angiepen
2007-05-10 08:55 pm UTC (link)
Well, right -- there are a lot of other fingers to choose from too, after all.... [flees!]

Thanks, hon! ;)

Angie

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[info]ireth06
2007-05-10 08:56 pm UTC (link)
I'm just hoping Merriwether isn't going to come over and do it him self....because Sean seems to be a little reluctant to cut of a finger! ***thumbs up for Sean and Orlando...***

I'm even more curious as to what exactly is going on (or not going on) between Orlando and his dad.....

And I'm hoping that something will be going on soon between Orlando and Sean......***big grin!!!***

Thanks for posting so quickly, hugs and kisses!!!

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[info]angiepen
2007-05-11 03:42 am UTC (link)
Lots of stuff still to come. :) The boys have a lot to deal with, separately as well as together. [cuddles boys] Thanks!

Angie

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[info]galor5
2007-05-11 03:37 am UTC (link)
Oh dear! Well I think it's pretty safe to say that Sean isn't going to be harming the lad. He's already grown fond of him, and Orlando of his captor.

Wonderful writing!!

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[info]angiepen
2007-05-11 03:43 am UTC (link)
Oh dear is a pretty good way of summing up their current situation, yes. [nodnod] Thanks, hon -- I'm glad you're enjoying it! :D

Angie

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[info]giselleslash
2007-05-11 04:27 am UTC (link)
Ah, there we go...a hint of interest from both sides. Very nice :) But now I need to know what Sean's suppose to do to our poor boy! You're posting the next part immediatley, yeah? *g*

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[info]angiepen
2007-05-11 07:04 pm UTC (link)
Ummm... no? [flees!] Sunday! Next one Sunday! [laugh/flail]

What Sean's supposed to do is render one of Orlando's fingers individually transportable and hand it over to one of Merriwether's messenger boys when he shows up. For what he's actually going to do, we'll have to wait and see. [pets fretting Sean]

Thanks for commenting. :D

Angie

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[info]pecos
2007-05-11 06:20 am UTC (link)
hey...who put all these pins and needles under me?

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[info]angiepen
2007-05-11 07:05 pm UTC (link)
Oh, is that a bad place for them? 'Cause I haven't done any sewing in a while and figured they'd be safe there, you know...? ;;)

Thanks, hon! [hugz]

Angie

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[info]moody_girl
2007-05-11 07:04 am UTC (link)
yay! you updated! Booo for the suggestion that Sean chop off a finger! Yay for Orli liking Sean! Boo for the situtation they are in! Boo for leaving us hanging! lol can you tell I've had too much sugar tonight? I'm really liking this and I hope you update soon! :)

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[info]angiepen
2007-05-11 07:06 pm UTC (link)
Sugar is good! LOL! Thanks for commenting -- I'm glad you're enjoying it. :D

Angie

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[info]slashorama
2007-05-11 07:17 am UTC (link)
I'm really enjoying this story. I like the way you are slowly building their interest in each other and revealing little bits of their true character and history along the way. Looking forward to the next chapter. :D

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[info]angiepen
2007-05-11 07:07 pm UTC (link)
Thanks! I was afraid for a bit that it was going too slow but most people seem to think not, whew! I'm glad you're enjoying it!

Angie

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[info]alran
2007-05-11 09:06 am UTC (link)
Indeed, now what?
Thrilling.

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[info]angiepen
2007-05-11 07:08 pm UTC (link)
Thank you! :D

Angie

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[info]foxrafer
2007-05-11 06:53 pm UTC (link)
Sean what in the world are you going to do now? I hope that I'm so far behind that the next part is posted already 'cause it won't be easy to wait!

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[info]angiepen
2007-05-11 07:08 pm UTC (link)
Ummm, no? [duck] Next chapter on Sunday, I hope. [crossed fingers] Thanks, hon!

Angie

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[info]january_snow
2007-05-11 07:24 pm UTC (link)
Next? Please?? Soon???

I love the atmosphere you create, boredom, claustrophobia, pain and the attraction being there despite the situation, plus how their feelings mirror each other in an 'this is ridiculous, stop thinking that' way.

"Some disagreements are larger than others," he murmured, so quietly Sean could barely hear him.

That one hurt. And Orlando seems so hopeless, even though he draws some comfort and cautious hope from Sean's behaviour.

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[info]angiepen
2007-05-11 07:53 pm UTC (link)
I'm shooting for Sunday. [crossing fingers] I have a fest challenge story due on Monday but I'm trying to keep up with the schedule I've set for this story too. [crossing fingers harder]

And thanks! It's hard to keep things interesting when the characters themselves are bored, LOL! It's good to know it's working out. :)

Orlando seems so hopeless, even though he draws some comfort and cautious hope from Sean's behaviour.

Yes, there's a lot going on behind Orlando's emotional attachment to Sean, more than just, "OMG this guy could kill me, I'd better make nice with him!!" [nod]

Angie

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