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Fic: Family Obligations, Chapter 4
Title: Family Obligations, Chapter 4
Author: AngiePen
Fandom: Celebrity RPS
Pairing: Orlando Bloom/Sean Bean
Rating: R
Challenge: AU Orlibean. Sean is hired to kidnap Orlando who he assumes is a spoiled rich kid who turns out to be anything but, when the ransom isn't paid the order comes down for Sean to kill him. It's a race against time to get them both to safety. Written for [info]amygirl's request at [info]the_challenger.
Summary: Sean's little brother has a taste for the ponies but no talent when it comes to choosing winners, and owes a local gangster a lot more money than he can come up with. Sean agrees to do an "easy job" in payment of the debt -- kidnapping a spoiled young punk named Bloom and hanging on to him while the gangster gets a ransom from the lad's family. It should've been a simple job, but then things started to get complicated.
Disclaimer: I don't own anyone you recognize. I know nothing about their social lives or sexual activities, more's the pity. This is fiction, period. It is done as a labor of love and I make no money from it.

Previous Chapters: One, Two, Three



Sean snapped his phone shut and restrained himself from putting a fist through the wall.

He'd managed to persuade Merriwether that a lock of hair and a piece of jewelry would do for a first threat but when the bastard had hung up on him he'd been left wondering whether it'd actually been his persuasion that'd done the trick or whether Merriwether'd been playing Sean for some reason of his own. His dinner sat in his belly like a stone and threatened to make a reappearance. He sat down on the toilet and rested his face in his hands.

This was growing and twisting and was turning into something Sean wanted no part of. The kidnapping itself'd been bad enough, right about on the edge of what he'd have been willing to agree to. But the idea'd been that no one would get hurt -- he'd grab the kid, sit on him for a bit and then cut him loose to go back to his life of being a useless rich snot and none the worse for it, maybe with a story to impress his mates.

But looking back now, he had to wonder if that'd ever been what Merriwether'd had in mind. Had he ever planned for it to be a quick catch-and-release? What if Orlando's da did change his mind and paid the ransom -- what'd the twisty bastard order then?

Sean knew that in films the kidnappers always went to kill the victim after they'd got their money but he'd no idea whether that was true or how often. He'd never known anyone who'd been kidnapped, nor paid much attention when there was a mention in the papers or on the telly; it wasn't part of his world and he'd had his own concerns.

He'd been careful not to let Orlando see him but would Merriwether believe that? Would he even care?

He glanced up at the closed door in the direction of Orlando's chair and admitted that he honestly couldn't swear Orlando hadn't seen him at all, at least from the back or from a sharp angle, not for the last day or so since he'd left the lad's hands free. He could've snuck a peek with Sean none the wiser if he were quick and clever about it.

A moan escaped, muffled in Sean's palms. He'd tried to be reasonable and look after the lad, let him be as comfortable as he could be and all, and now he might end up with Merriwether insisting he be murdered for it.

I'm no good at this! He rubbed his forehead with the heels of his hands and tried to think. I manage a welding shop. I'm not a kidnapper nor any other kind of criminal and I don't know the rules nor how it all works and the lad's going to end up dead if I can't think of something.

For that matter, he'd no guarantee he himself was safe. He and Orlando might end up sharing a grave once Merriwether was done with the both of them.

And he didn't know enough about the situation to know if he were tipping over into paranoia or if he'd learned enough to finally be thinking smart.

He thought about just putting Orlando in the car and taking him home. That'd end it right there and if none of them were arrested afterwards then Merriwether'd know for sure that the lad couldn't identify any of them -- he'd have no reason to hurt him then. That'd be all fine for Orlando but it'd still leave Sean and his family to deal with a right pissed off Merriwether and he doubted the bully-boys'd stop with just threatening if Sean crossed their boss, on top of Tommy owing money.

No, it'd be better if Merriwether got what he wanted, at least as much of it as Sean was ready to allow him.

The first thing was to figure out how to get Orlando's father to pay the ransom. Once that was done, everything else was details and Sean thought -- hoped, prayed if he were in a praying habit -- he could work out the rest so Orlando ended up back home safe and clearly a threat to nobody. Then the job'd be done and Tommy'd be clear and Sean could go back to the shop and his worst worry'd be collecting on that overdue council job or the oxy delivery coming late again.

Right, then. He needed more information.

He got up and headed back out to the living room. Orlando was curled up in his chair, his arms wrapped around his middle in a way Sean'd come to recognize as nervous or even scared.

Sean settled back into his chair and said, "I need to know what's up with you and your Da. We've got to work out some way t'fix this 'cause he's got to pay the ransom or it's all going to get messy."

Orlando just sat quiet and still for a bit, then shook his head. "It's not something I can fix."

"How about if you tell me what the brangle's about at least?" Sean coaxed. He was hoping that his outside angle might spot something the people closer to the problem had missed. It was really the only hope he had so he hung on to it with grim determination.

Another few moments of silence went by, then Orlando said, "I'm gay. You know that. My father can't accept it. He was raised in an environment saturated with family duty and dignity and putting on a solid, respectable face to the outside and he can't understand why I won't just marry a proper young woman and father the next heir."

Sean frowned and cocked his head. He knew plenty of people who weren't exactly friendly toward homos -- he'd had to deal with a few of them himself, although he liked the ladies as well and was reasonably discreet about his lads for his family's sake -- but Orlando's father seemed like a throw-back. "Are you an only child, then?" he asked. "No one else to carry on the family line? No brothers or cousins to go into the family business or whatever your da's so concerned after?"

Orlando shrugged. "My father had a younger brother who had two sons. My cousin William, the oldest, is married to a very nice young lady who's expecting a baby boy in the fall, but the title's entailed. My father is the Viscount Rasley -- you knew that, right?"

Sean nodded, then caught himself and said, "Aye. So you get the title no matter what your da thinks, then -- he can't just say his nephew gets it. And if you've a manor house or a castle or summat? I suppose that frosted his bum."

Orlando's lips twitched in a smirk for a moment before he nodded, unknowingly echoing Sean's gesture. "A large house and some park land, yes. Most titles are entailed, and the family seats, but in our case the family business is as well." He paused and frowned as though trying to figure out where to start, then said, "When the third Viscount married Miss Agatha Maddock in 1801, it was purely for her money. Her father was an ironmonger who'd grown a very successful steel mill and had invested in the Duke of Bridgewater's canal scheme as well. It was the sort of socially shameful marriage many noblemen near bankrupcy were contracting at the time. Mr. Maddock was a shrewd man and one of his conditions was that when his only daughter's oldest son inherited the Maddock business, that it be added to the entail. He wanted to guarantee that his wealth would always go to his blood."

"So you can't even be cut off without an income, then."

"No, at least not forever -- once he's gone, I'll inherit regardless. Despite what my father might wish, I'm going to be the next Viscount Rasley and the next majority owner of British Western Steel, unless I fall in front of a omnibus before my father dies." His blind face "looked" away and he shrugged. "Or unless I'm murdered by kidnappers."

"Then it'd be your cousin stepping up and your da getting what he wants." Sean scowled, then shook his head. "But still, would he do nothing and let you die? I can't think of any man turning his back on his blood and letting him be killed if he could've prevented it, no matter what he might think of the lad's tastes in sex."

"I... I don't know." Orlando's voice sounded hollow and stiff, as though he were trying very hard to maintain a calm face. "I wouldn't have thought so before but things have been worse lately. Before, we could at least be civil to each other but even that's deteriorated over the last few months and now he truly seems to hate me. I really don't think he'll pay. Letting you-- the-- your employer--" he stuttered over the term, "some random kidnappers get rid of me would remove the single largest problem in his life."

Sean had to believe it, or at least believe that Orlando believed it. There's none so queer as folks, he thought to himself, gazing blindly out a window into the darkness. Can't say it's impossible.

Still, he tried, "And he can't accept that your cousin will inherit eventually, or your cousin's lad, when you're gone? It'll take a mite longer but it'll be the same in the end."

"No. Having a Viscount Rasley who refuses to 'do his duty to the family' and 'present a respectable front' is too great a stain on the honor of the name for him to bear without fussing."

"Fussing." That was a good word for it. Sean sat and glared at his reflection on the window, silently thinking.



Sean'd made tea, as much to give himself a few minutes to think and something to do with his hands while he did it as anything else. He pressed a mug into Orlando's hands and settled back down with his own, straddling the wooden chair with the mug resting on the back.

He'd decided to confide in Orlando, at least up to a point. He'd felt twitchy about this whole deal all along and since his phone call with Merriwether in particular he was fair sure that he was on the wrong side. But neither could he just switch. He was stuck as much as the lad, even if there were no one actually forcing him to stay. At least, no one within arm's reach.

But he needed the lad to understand and mayhap between the two of them they could figure something out.

So he said, "Look, then, here's how it happened..." and explained about Tommy and the races and his debts. About the threats and the heart attack -- "And as soon as he's well again, his Katie's likely to put him back in hospital for bringing this down upon us," -- and Merriwether's offer, and what he'd demanded when he'd rung. He still gave no names, of course, because ignorance was the lad's best shield now, weak though it was. But he needed him to understand what was happening and why.

When he was done, Sean shrugged and said, "I'd never've agreed in the first place if I'd known anyone'd be getting hurt, much less that I'd be expected to do it. I managed to talk him down but he's sending one of his bully-boys over to collect the stuff to send to your folks and after that I'm out of ideas but we need to think of something." He muttered a curse into his mug and took a sip. "It weren't supposed to be like this, yeah? I were s'posed to grab some spoiled little rich brat and sit on him for a couple days until the money were paid and then dump yeh back out none the worse. But it's all gone pear-shaped and we need to think of something."

Orlando'd rested his head on the upholstered back of the chair while listening. His knees were drawn up again and his arms wrapped round them with the tea mug perched on top. Sean saw his shoulders twitch as though he were silently laughing for a moment, and he said, "That's what my father's been calling me. A 'spoiled little brat,' as though I'd decided to be gay just to spite him. As though I could choose to obey him and just change somehow and everything would be fine if only I were a good son and cared at all about my duty to my family."

And... there was something about that, something that was setting off a faint bell in the back of Sean's head. It was significant somehow, he just knew it, but before he could think of how, he heard the crunch of tires outside.

"Bugger it, they're here already! Fookin' hell!" Sean set his mug down on the floor hard enough to splash, grabbed Orlando's out of his hands and did the same with it, then grabbed the lad by the arm and hustled him toward the bedroom. Orlando was still dizzy, and confused besides, and after he'd whacked his knee against the sofa, Sean just swung him up into his arms and carried him the rest of the way, dumping him on the bed with a bounce.

The cuffs were still on the battered dresser and he snapped them back onto Orlando's wrists behind his back. "Yeh've been here, just like that, the whole time, yeah?" Sean hissed in a harsh whisper. "Just lie there and look frightened and don't say a bloody word unless you have to. You don't know anything, you're a rich little twit without a brain to call your own and no threat to anyone, right?"

Orlando gave a jerky nod, doing a good job of looking frightened. Sean had a feeling the lad wasn't acting but that was fine for now. He turned and left him, making it back out to the main room just in time to answer the banging on the door.



The sudden whirlwind shuffle'd caught Orlando off balance. Or off guard, rather; he was always off balance recently. The room had swayed around him when his captor had yanked him to his feet and he'd been about to fall when the man had scooped him up and carried him.

He'd just realized that there was another associate of the boss kidnapper's approaching outside -- and most likely one who wouldn't have any problems with hurting him, being a career type criminal rather than one who was temporarily moonlighting at it, if he could believe what he'd just been told -- and his heart had lurched with a sudden fear he hadn't felt since he'd woken up and first realized his situation. He'd stifled a strong desire to cling to his captor; his earlier belief that this man was his only protection had returned in force, especially now that one of the "real" criminals was on his way in.

Instead he'd managed to just stay quiet and let himself be carried and dropped and turned and manipulated. The cuffs were snapped on tight enough to pinch but he'd just winced and stayed quiet. He'd nearly laughed at the hurriedly whispered instructions; he didn't need any coaching to act like he was scared, not at all. The man pulling up outside worked for someone who'd casually ordered one of his fingers cut off and most likely this new one wasn't the sort who'd hesitate to carry out the order. For all he knew, the man was here to override his captor's reluctance and do the job as originally commanded, despite what the boss kidnapper'd been persuaded to agree to earlier on the phone.

All he could do was lie there, tense and hoping, and try not to let the fear overwhelm him.
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Author's Note: Yes, I know that property entailments can be broken nowadays and most have been already. Consider this another aspect of the AU if you like; I've always liked entailments in historicals because of how well they help twist and complicate things. My thanks for your indulgence in my use of it here. :D


Next Chapter: Chapter Five



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[info]jackieville
2007-05-13 01:35 pm UTC (link)
My heart is pounding out of my chest!!! I hope Sean can protect our boy *bites nails*

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[info]angiepen
2007-05-13 01:46 pm UTC (link)
Whee, you're fast! Thanks, hon -- Sean hopes so too. :/

Angie

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[info]belle_lestrange
2007-05-13 02:07 pm UTC (link)
*squee* omg what a crappy situation...sean and orlando are just both victims of some kind...i hope everything will turn out alright for them! *huggles* thanks so much for sharing!

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[info]angiepen
2007-05-13 02:16 pm UTC (link)
Well, I've always been good at dumping characters into the crapper, so.... ;) Thanks back for commenting! :D

Angie

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[info]ocko_okate
2007-05-13 02:12 pm UTC (link)
You´re officially my hero for this day :) I´ve succesfully managed to waste a perfectly good weekend with having a terrible cold, and really badly needed something good to read to cheer me up. (even if this chapter isn´t exactly of the happy kind, but I think we can trust you on this one *wink*). Thank you for the update!

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[info]angiepen
2007-05-13 02:16 pm UTC (link)
Glad to help. :) I hope you feel better soon, hon. [hugz]

Angie

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[info]lhazzie
2007-05-13 02:13 pm UTC (link)
Seriously though, no one says mayhap anymore.

I'm loving this though, right edge-of-your-seat stuff.

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[info]angiepen
2007-05-13 02:20 pm UTC (link)
Sorry. [duck] The thing is, I've already established that Sean does say it, and stopping now would be inconsistent which is at least as bad as having him use an obsolete word. :/ It's like I now have a great list of "Yorkshireisms" thanks to [info]surreysmum, but I can't just suddenly have Sean start using a bunch of them because it wouldn't sound right with the previous chapters. If I'd just spelled it wrong or something like that then I'd go back and fix it, but actually rewording it is more problematic, so.... Sorry. :(

I'm glad you're enjoying the story, though. Thanks for commenting! {{}}

Angie

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[info]doylebaby
2007-05-13 02:45 pm UTC (link)
I love the way Sean is worrying how to get both of them out of this in one piece. Orlando's dad sounds like a real arsehole. I hope Sean will be able to keep Merriwether's cronie in check or Orlando might be in serious danger.

Great work as always, hon! :)

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[info]angiepen
2007-05-13 02:56 pm UTC (link)
To be fair, Sean's still worried about himself and his family at least as much as Orlando. He could solve Orlando's problem by just tossing him in the car and dropping him off at home, or at a police station -- there you go. But he has his own family to think of too, and the workers at the shop since Merriwether's shown he's willing to stage a confrontation there, and Sean's not going to toss anyone he considers to be "his" to the wolves. That makes it difficult. :/

Yeah, Orlando's father's a real winner. :P And yes, Sean hopes so too. [crossed fingers]

Thanks, hon! [hugz]

Angie

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[info]tati
2007-05-13 02:45 pm UTC (link)
"That's what my father's been calling me. A 'spoiled little brat,'

i'm not surprised Sean's 'bells' went off. mine are ringing full force. methinks the bastard of a father staged the whole thing to get rid of Orlando. fucker *grrrr*

keeping fingers tightly crossed here, hoping Sean find the way out of this mess for them both

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[info]angiepen
2007-05-13 02:56 pm UTC (link)
Sean has his own suspicions. [nod]

Thanks, hon -- he's working on it! :)

Angie

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[info]amygirl
2007-05-13 02:54 pm UTC (link)
OMG...this is so great. I love all the twists and turns and a little creative license is allowed in AU's... *nods*...heck I've remade the entire Stanford campus in one of mine so I don't have to be locked down into the real layout and don't feel bad about it at all so pretending that entitlements still stand is probably pretty low on the list of bad things to do while writing fan fic. Seriously I'm all about realism if I can but at the same time I totally accept the fact that I'm writing fanfic for my own enjoyment and not trying to make money off of it so I'll bend things if I need to...as long as they don't hurt anyone and you're upfront about it I don't see the problem. If it bugs someone then that's they're issue to deal with.

Anywho...I really love the twists and turns and I think I might have to hurt Orlando's father if my current suspicions are proved correctly. *grumbles*

More please...I need more... :-)

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[info]angiepen
2007-05-13 02:59 pm UTC (link)
Thanks -- I just couldn't resist using it. :D

I have this physiological compulsion to be twisty, at least in my longer stories. ;) Glad you're enjoying!

Angie

PS -- I'll hold him down and you can kick 'im [nodnod]

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[info]galor5
2007-05-13 03:11 pm UTC (link)
And the plot thickens...

Lovin' this alot!!

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[info]angiepen
2007-05-13 03:12 pm UTC (link)
[stirs more flour into the mix...] ;)

Thanks! :D

Angie

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[info]alex_quine
2007-05-13 03:31 pm UTC (link)
An intriguing read, full of potential for plot-twists, and a nicely developing relationship between the principal characters - at a speed that fits with the action. Thanks for posting.

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[info]angiepen
2007-05-13 03:40 pm UTC (link)
I'm glad the pacing is working for you -- thanks for the comment! [beam]

Angie

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[info]dienw
2007-05-13 04:44 pm UTC (link)
Ooohh, the intrigue. I can't decide if it's Orlando's father who's trying to get rid of him ...or his cousin who stands to inherit. (hmmmm) Love that Orlando and Sean each "confessed". Orlando about why his father hates him, and Sean about the whole kidnapping mess.

Okay, sitting nice and quietly, and patiently awaiting next chapter.

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[info]angiepen
2007-05-13 08:50 pm UTC (link)
;D Have fun figuring it out! [humming]

And Sean just figured that having an extra brain working on the problem was a good thing. [nod] And that Orlando deserved to know what was going on, that he'd be less likely to do something stupid later on out of ignorance, you know? Let's hope it helps. :/ Thanks!

Angie

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Family Obligations, Chapter 4
[info]willys_digs
2007-05-13 05:53 pm UTC (link)
Ooooo, I heard the bell ring a little before Sean heard it... *g*

Now all Sean needs is a big freaking stick..

hugs

Jo
p.s.... see that's why I leave the writing to you guys.. heheheeee

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Re: Family Obligations, Chapter 4
[info]angiepen
2007-05-13 08:51 pm UTC (link)
Readers are often smarter than characters -- something about your brains being 3D and theirs being 2D, you know? They just can't keep up. ;)

Thanks, hon, and hugz back!

Angie, hunting for a big freaking stick to give Sean

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[info]lucky_starre
2007-05-13 06:25 pm UTC (link)
looooooooooooooove.

i was checking for this this weekend :) thanks for sharing! it's fantastic!

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[info]angiepen
2007-05-13 08:52 pm UTC (link)
Thanks back for commenting, hon! I'm glad you're enjoying it! {{{}}}

Angie

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[info]giselleslash
2007-05-13 08:46 pm UTC (link)
LOVE it! I'm so happy to see regular updates with this...are you writing it as you go or do you have an idea of how long it's going to be? I'd love for it to go on a great deal longer! *nods* Yep, definitely :)

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[info]angiepen
2007-05-13 08:55 pm UTC (link)
I'm working very hard to get chapters banged out in time to post on the schedule I decided I want to keep, heh. [duck] I'm thinking at least ten chapters but it might be longer, I really don't know. I know what's going on and I have a general idea of what's going to happen, but getting it down line-by-line is something else, you know? We'll have to see how long it ends up. [biting fingernail]

Next thing posted will be a fest story due tomorrow (which also needs to be finished) and then I'm going to try very hard to get Chapter Five done for Tuesday. [crossed fingers]

Thanks for commenting, hon! [hugz]

Angie

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[info]january_snow
2007-05-13 09:22 pm UTC (link)
Oh no!!!! Can't think of anything else to say. Surely it would not be in accordance with family duty to let the heir come to harm??
And I just love your Sean.

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[info]angiepen
2007-05-13 09:27 pm UTC (link)
One wouldn't think. :P But Orlando's father's being a prick about it. [kicks]

Thanks, hon! [hugz]

Angie

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[info]ireth06
2007-05-13 10:15 pm UTC (link)
I'm starting to think it's not Merriwether who calls the shots....it's someone else.....
So sad if I'm right......

I don't know much about entailments but I lurve the complication!!!

Thanks for sharing!!
***cuddles***

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[info]angiepen
2007-05-13 10:23 pm UTC (link)
Basically, entailment was a medieval legal creation designed to ensure that inheritable whatever was kept in the family. As it applies to property, an entailment would usually be set up so that one jerkwad along a noble line couldn't sell the family lands, or lose them gambling or something like that. An entailment could dictate that property go only to a child in the family line, or only to a male, or only to a female. Entailed property is a fairly popular plot device in the Regency romance genre :) as well as in other England-based historical novels.

And thanks for commenting -- I'm glad you're enjoying it. :D

Angie

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[info]foxrafer
2007-05-13 11:51 pm UTC (link)
I'm counting on Sean being a quick thinker and the thug leaves only with hair and a chain. I love this Sean; he has so many people he wants to get out of this in one piece and you can feel his stress. Now more than ever I think daddy is behind this. (I'd rather be wrong, just cause how horrible would that be, but I'm really leaning that way.)

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[info]angiepen
2007-05-14 03:53 am UTC (link)
That would be pretty awful, wouldn't it? [heavy sigh]

And yeah, poor Sean's going to keel over of a heart attack somewhere in the middle if this keeps up and that won't do anyone any good. [cuddles Sean]

Angie

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[info]pixiereader
2007-05-14 12:32 am UTC (link)
I wonder if the 'obligations' are Orlando's families, and it's one or more of them behind this 'kidnapping.

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[info]angiepen
2007-05-14 03:55 am UTC (link)
The "obligations" in the title refer to both families -- being able to ignore either side would make the problems a lot easier to work with. Unfortunately, family has to be dealt with, even when it's exhausting and complicated and you just don't want to. [pets both boys]

Angie

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[info]illuminated_sin
2007-05-14 11:35 am UTC (link)
Whoops, commented in the wrong place. =P

Poor Orli. That damned twat of a father's set it all up. >:( No wonder he won't pay up. Grrr.

::cuddles Orli::

::pets Sean::

::kills Orli's dad so Orli will inherit now and it won't be an issue anymore::

::makes Merriwether drop dead of spontaneous human combustion, putting the fear in his henchmen so they all run away::

::drops rocks on stragglers::

There. That about fixes things. Orlando already wants to cling to Sean for protection. Sean feels the need to take care of him. They'll wind up together. Make it so, number one! ;)

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[info]angiepen
2007-05-14 11:37 am UTC (link)
LOL! Sean and Orlando appreciate the help! :D Thanks, hon! [hugz]

Angie

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[info]weotolkien
2007-05-16 02:03 am UTC (link)
Oh! I'm really loving this story, Angie! Late, as usual, but totally enjoying it :D

This is an interesting Sean you have here. I like how he will seemingly do anything for family. Even when it takes him in a bit over his head :P And of course Orlando would easily squirm his his way into Sean's heart as well :)

I look forward to seeing how Sean handles this. *bites nails*

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[info]angiepen
2007-05-16 02:50 am UTC (link)
Thanks, hon! Yes, Sean has a very strong sense of "mine," and of "us vs. them. His loyalty to "mine" and "us" is very intense. And yeah, Orlando's steadily working his way into the "mine" and "us" group. :D

This is definitely getting tough, though. [nodnod]

Angie

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Well done!!
[info]slashorama
2007-05-16 04:03 pm UTC (link)
I started watching Pride & Prejudice (BBC's Firth/Ehle version) for the umpteenth time last night so I had a tiny chuckle at the entailment; however, despite its anachronism I LOVE it.

The suspense is great and I love all the visual details you're using to make this story come alive. Like many others, I think that the father is behind it. I'd suspect the cousin, but Orlando seems to like him (or at least his wife) and I take that as a hint from you to look elsewhere. Of course, you could have thrown that in there to put readers off his scent. Hmmm... I wonder if the evil henchman will notice that there's two teacups on the floor.

Cheers.

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Re: Well done!!
[info]angiepen
2007-05-16 07:46 pm UTC (link)
I love Regencies too! Glad you're enjoying that particular twist, even if it's not completely authentic to a modern story. ;)

Hmmm... I wonder if the evil henchman will notice that there's two teacups on the floor.

We probably won't know for a while whether or not Donny saw it or what he'll make of it if he did, but good catch on your part. [innocent humming]

Thanks!

Angie

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[info]livdh
2007-06-06 09:00 pm UTC (link)
Up till now, I've read the four chapters in one time. This story is great ! This story is really well written. Poor Orlando ! What kind of father does he have !

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[info]angiepen
2007-06-07 05:11 am UTC (link)
I'm glad you're enjoying it. :D And yeah, Orlando doesn't exactly have the most loving or supportive home life. :P Thanks for commenting!

Angie

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