AngiePen ([info]angiepen) wrote,
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Fic: A Lost Boy, Chapter 1
Title: A Lost Boy
Author: AngiePen
Pairing: Liam Neeson/Orlando Bloom, minor Liam/Johnny Depp, plus a few other pair-ups among the supporting characters
Rating: NC-17 overall
Summary: Slave Orlando's been taken and the kidnappers aren't interested in ransom. And of course Master Liam's thundering rage is only at the personal insult, that someone would disrespect him by daring to touch his property.
Disclaimer: I don't own anyone you recognize. I know nothing about their social lives or sexual activities, more's the pity. This is fiction, period. It is done as a labor of love and I make no money from it.
Notes: 1) Set in [info]poisontaster's Kept Boy universe. The first few stories are linked here; the rest (we're hoping) are getting linked in [info]whatwekeep. This is an AU universe where slavery is common and is in fact legally required among the wealthy as a way of doing their part to "support" the poor. See the original story, "A Kept Boy," linked above, and the FAQ, which is the first post in the community.
2) Yes, I know Orlando's mother's name. I have a policy of not using non-celeb relatives in my RPS stories, except for the most minor and positive mentions. That's not the case here, so in this 'verse, Orlando's mother's name is Margaret.
3) Everyone is American unless specified otherwise.



[Thirty-Two Years Ago]

"Neeson." The voice was strong and abrupt, obviously not one to be troubled with trivialities.

"Yes, um, My Lord, this is Walters from Commerce." Hesitant, wishing he were anywhere else.

"Yes?" Sharp, impatient.

"It's, that is, it's about your cook." Really not wanting to be having this conversation.

"Yes? I'm coming for her this afternoon. Is there a problem?" Clearly there had better not be.

"Err, I'm afraid, that is, there's a baby, My Lord."

"I know that. I agreed she could bring the infant with her." You're an idiot and I'm going to hang up in about four seconds.

"No, or... I mean, yes, My Lord. But, err, there's another one. That is, she's pregnant, my Lord."

Silence.

"My Lord?"

"I hope you're not expecting me to pay extra."

"Er? Umm, no, My Lord! Of course not!"

"Fine."

Click. Dialtone.

"So? Did he want to choose someone else?"

"Umm, no, it seems not."



[Today]

There he was, right on time, and he was even alone. He always showed up at the grocery store at about the same time, between six and seven in the morning every Wednesday, when the place was stocked up but nearly empty of people. Sometimes he came with that older free man, and sometimes with the slave woman. A twofer would've been nice, but one was better than having to pass for another week, and this was the valuable one -- a collared body-slave, still beautiful even if not quite as young as they'd have liked.

He always parked in the same place, too, under the tree on the end; it was right across from the front of the market, and had only one other space next to it, minimizing the chance of damage to his master's car.

Marton had had Brendan park the van in the very next slot, cracked the sliding door panel open, and waited. The target had pulled in right next to them and everything went exactly according to plan. He got out, locked the car, and Marton grabbed him from behind. A gag stuffed into his mouth when he opened it to yell, a quick drag back inside the van. Sheen slammed the door shut while Marton's arms were full of struggling target, then Brendan pulled out and they were gone.



[Twenty-Six Years Ago]

"Maggie! What've you got for me?"

Margaret Bloom glanced over her shoulder and gave her master the smile and quick nod which served as a show of respect whenever she was tending something hot. He'd told her when he'd first picked her and baby Samantha up from Commerce that staying on her feet and serving him more of the excellent food he'd tasted before choosing her was the kind of respect he wanted. Dropping something time-critical just to kneel or bow and then serving him burnt garbage was disrespectful and would get her punished.

She said, "I packed your saddlebag with chicken and biscuits, apple salad and chocolate turnovers, and two bottles of bock. If there was something else you'd like, I can get it for you in a moment."

That afternoon she was sauteing shallots and mushrooms and therefore stayed standing. She heard a shuffle and thump behind her, though, and gave a quick wince, then smiled to herself where no one could see. Another glance behind her, lower down this time, showed her five-year-old son crouched on the floor at their master's feet, his forehead pressed to the toe of one big boot. The fork Orlando had been using to seal the edges of the ravioli she'd made earlier lay carefully on the rolling mat where it would stay clean; at least he hadn't dropped it this time in his eagerness to show off what he'd learned.

The kitchen was silent for a few moments, save for the hissing and crackling of hot fat, then Master Liam said, "You may stand, Orlando," his voice gentle but grave.

Margaret gave the vegetables one more toss, then slid them into a bowl and turned in time to see Orlando climb to his feet, beam up at the man towering above him, and ask, "Did I do it right?"

She rolled her eyes and saw one corner of Master Liam's mouth quirk in a not-quite-suppressed grin. He was a stern master, fair when served well by free or slave, but not a man with whom any but his peers would presume, and he had few peers. Little Orlando was one of the few people Maggie had ever seen him smile at.

It alarmed her and brought up fears she did her best to suppress. It wasn't as though she could do anything to prevent them from coming true.

"You did very well, Orlando," Master Liam said.

The little boy's face beamed even brighter and he threw his arms around his master's leg. Maggie tried not to notice how his face was just around thigh level.

"Thank you!" Orlando gave Master Liam a sunny smile, then took a step backward and gave him a perfect ninety-degree standing bow before dashing back to the table and his task. She could see him watching Master Liam for a reaction, though, and she was sure Master Liam could see it too.

"Fearless little monkey," he said. He gave the boy's messy brown curls a ruffle on his way across the kitchen to where Maggie had left his saddlebags, near the back door. "This will do nicely, Maggie. I'll be back for dinner, and might have a couple of guests with me."

"Yes, Master." Maggie bowed as he left, and Orlando scrambled off his chair to bow again too. Master Liam strode out, his saddlebags slung over one shoulder and an unfrosted cupcake pilfered from a cooling rack in his hand, without looking around to see either of them give him that respect. He just assumed they would, and of course he was right.

She watched Orlando bounce back onto his chair once more, her eyes and mouth pinched with worry. She should start sending Orlando out to tend the herb garden with Samantha, keep him out of the way. He still had a hard time telling the herbs from the weeds, but Samantha was a good, responsible girl and could mind him. Master Liam might well go by the small patch of herbs from time to time, but he definitely came through the kitchen a few times a day when he was in residence -- the man had an insatiable appetite for sweets and was constantly grazing on them, whether from regular meals, trays she sent him, or whatever he could lay hands on in the kitchen itself. That made the kitchen no place for Orlando. He was five, after all, and an adorable little devil, even if she was his mother. She'd known masters and mistresses who'd shown undesirable interest in slaves that young, no matter what the legal age was.

She couldn't prevent it, but she might be able to delay.



[Today]

Marton buckled the gag while Sheen jabbed a hypo into the target's thigh right through his pants leg. Intravenous would work faster than intramuscular, but getting the slave to lie still and then finding a vein in the moving van, no matter how carefully Brendan drove, would negate any speed advantage so they did it the easy way. With the gag secure, Marton pulled a pillowcase over the slave's head before he had a chance to see any of them; the chance of him escaping before being fully processed was minuscule, but Marton wasn't ready to take any risks when a random traffic accident could end up with the whole pack of them convicted and facing Commerce themselves.

He tossed the still-struggling body down onto the floor before bracing himself against the sway of the van turning, then turning again, then the bump out of the parking lot. Finally they were on the main road and would have a minute or so of straight, smooth driving.

The target kicked and Marton cursed, rubbed his thigh, then slammed the target's forehead into the floor of the van. It was carpeted so it shouldn't leave a permanent mark, but knocking him silly -- or even just teaching him to stay still -- before the ketamine took hold would make things that much easier.

Marton tugged the target's shirt open, pulled it off and stuffed it into a grocery bag, then picked up the scanner and flicked it on. Sheen pulled off the slave's shoes, socks, trousers, briefs, each to go into their own plastic sack, while Marton ran the scanner over the target's torso. That was usually where... there. The scanner beeped just below the slave's left shoulderblade.

Marton put the scanner away in its case and picked up a scalpel, while Sheen lay his body over the slave's shoulder and head, with one leg pressing over his hips, to hold him down. Marton made a quick incision, ignored the muffled scream and feeble jerk when the body under his hands convulsed, then reached in with tweezers and pulled out the chip. It went down on top of a metal toolbox. He took a hammer out of the lower drawer and Crack! the chip was shattered. One down.

Next Chapter: Chapter Two



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[info]aleathiel
2008-10-15 04:28 pm UTC (link)
I'm commenting without having read this yet to promise that I will :P

I also want to know whether I need to go back and read the other fic and so one in order to understand/get the most from yours?

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[info]angiepen
2008-10-15 04:37 pm UTC (link)
Hummm. [ponder] To get the most, yeah, it'd probably help to at least read the story so far in "A Kept Boy." Or skim through the FAQ. I don't think it's actually necessary, though. The tropes used are fairly common, and keeping in mind that this is a more realistic slave-verse rather than a "Whee, fun!!" slave-verse should be enough to let you slide in and get what's going on.

There's a lot of worldbuilding going on in the other stories, since this is all shiny and everyone's having a blast playing in the new sandbox, but this story is pretty well self-contained in that all you really need to get it is right here, with maybe a few exceptions. All I can think of right now is the fact that "Commerce" is the government agency which oversees slaves and slave-related transactions; I didn't specify that in the text. No other "Huh?" bits pop into my mind, although of course please ask if anything makes you go ?? or anything. :)

Angie

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[info]asknosecrets
2008-10-15 04:37 pm UTC (link)
I'm curious who Brendan is - OC, or someone we should know?

And this is really interesting stuff - Margaret's knowledge of her world, mixing with the mother's desire to protect her child, is very telling, in terms of what they have to deal with.

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[info]angiepen
2008-10-15 04:41 pm UTC (link)
Thanks, hon. :D

Brendan is Brendan Gleeson from KOH. Sheen is Michael Sheen, from same. I figured they'd make good bad guys. [grin]

And yeah, Margaret is torn between what she knows of reality and what she wants but probably can't have. :/ Kicking up a fuss would only get her punished, and ultimately sold (without her children) if she persisted, so all she can do is worry. I hate to think what her blood pressure probably is. :P

Angie

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[info]fiesty_red
2008-10-15 04:38 pm UTC (link)
Very interesting start, love. Can't wait for more. ^_^

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[info]angiepen
2008-10-15 04:42 pm UTC (link)
Thanks, hon! [hugz] I actually have a few more chapters ready to go, but I'm going to maintain a backlog of padding, just in case. I need to finish before NaNo starts, though, so that should keep me going. At any rate, it won't be too long between chunks.

Angie

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[info]embroiderama
2008-10-15 04:52 pm UTC (link)
Oh, wow! I love the set-up here, all the intervening years that are missing with a combination of things we can assume and things that are a mystery. I can't wait to see where it goes!

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[info]angiepen
2008-10-15 04:55 pm UTC (link)
Thank you! I'm glad you like the formatting; I had a lot of backstory before the "real" story began, and had to figure out some way of getting it in here without boring everyone to death. I'm very happy it's working for you. [beam] More soon. :)

Angie

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[info]mistry89
2008-10-15 05:13 pm UTC (link)
I think I'll stick to the FAQ for now, as I wanted to read this immediately!
Definitely something up with Margaret's provenance and Marton and Sheen seem like bad guys, so I'm intrigued at the slave-napping and wonder if the two things are connected.
Looking forward to more.
Cheers :)

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[info]angiepen
2008-10-15 05:18 pm UTC (link)
Thanks! I love watching people speculate. :D

Angie

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[info]temve
2008-10-15 06:14 pm UTC (link)
Hmmmm... intriguing. Also, this universe is the Next Big Fandom, y/y? :)

Looking forward to more, although I must admit I'm a tiny bit scared of this Master Liam...

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[info]angiepen
2008-10-15 06:18 pm UTC (link)
It sure seems to be shaping up that way. :D

And yeah, Master Liam can be a scary guy. [grin] Seriously, though, I wanted to do something different; I've written him a couple of times before and he was always very clearly a Good Guy, and once was incredibly mellow. I didn't want to just recycle the same character here, so I pushed him off in a different direction. I hope you like him anyway. :)

Angie

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[info]doylebaby
2008-10-15 07:02 pm UTC (link)
I've read Liam/Orlando in different set ups and they appealed enough to me to want to give this a go. I'm intrigued and I'll hang around to see where it's going. :)



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[info]angiepen
2008-10-15 07:04 pm UTC (link)
Coolness -- glad it grabbed you. :D

Angie

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[info]ai_hen
2008-10-15 07:12 pm UTC (link)
Hee, Liam ♥


This is fascinating, and thanks for the links to the other stories too.
*goes to browse*

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[info]angiepen
2008-10-15 07:14 pm UTC (link)
Thanks, I'm glad you're enjoying. :D And definitely go through the other stuff if you have time -- it's all pretty awesome. This universe has grabbed a lot of really great writers and they've been cranking out pages and pages of excellent fic.

Angie

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[info]liriel1810
2008-10-15 09:05 pm UTC (link)
Wow. What a complex and well thought out world. I'm well and truly hooked. Orlando in peril is a very big kink of mine. I don't think Liam will be best pleased at all when he finds out Orlando's been taken, but with the chip destroyed, how is he going to track him down?

Spare no expense, damn the torpedos and full steam ahead to find that boy!

Here's hoping Margaret's not so upset that her cooking suffers, that could only earn her punishment.

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[info]angiepen
2008-10-15 09:12 pm UTC (link)
Isn't it awesome? :D It's also not an enforced-continuity world -- it's more like a fandom of its own, where each writer can create her own continuity if she wants, which means you could hop in and write Orlando/Bean if you wanted. [innocent humming]

I don't think Liam will be best pleased at all when he finds out Orlando's been taken

Umm, no, that's a really safe bet. [wince] And yeah, tracking Orlando down is going to be tough. :/

Thanks, glad you're enjoying. :D

Angie

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[info]twicet
2008-10-15 09:45 pm UTC (link)
I only discovered this world a few days ago and just love it. With your story I am so glad for the background set-up as well as the present day action. Looking forward to more

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[info]angiepen
2008-10-15 09:50 pm UTC (link)
Thank you! I'm glad you like the alternating timelines. More soon. :)

Angie

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[info]flighty_dreams
2008-10-15 09:49 pm UTC (link)
Oh I like this so far. I'm definitely intrigued enough to want more. ;)

And I look fwd to Liam's reaction to finding out Orli's been taken. It will NOT be good... :S

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[info]angiepen
2008-10-15 10:07 pm UTC (link)
Thanks, more soon! :D And no, definitely not a good reaction. O_O

Angie

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[info]poisontaster
2008-10-16 02:19 am UTC (link)
Ooooh. Can't wait to see where it all goes.

I really felt for Margaret; it's such a rotten position to be in, to see what is happening or could be happening and be so helpless to stop it. And knowing that if you try, things could get that much worse for all of you.

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[info]angiepen
2008-10-16 03:19 am UTC (link)
Thanks! More soon. :)

And yeah, she's in a really lousy situation. [pets Margaret] I'm sure most slaves with kids feel the same way, too; lots of call for blood pressure meds among that population.

Angie

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[info]realm_of_ylith
2008-10-16 08:42 am UTC (link)
Woot! I do love an AU, and Liam/Orlando is a delicious pairing. *wink*

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[info]angiepen
2008-10-16 04:15 pm UTC (link)
Aren't they lovely? I wish more people wrote them. :D Thanks!

Angie

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[info]thetammyjo
2008-10-16 03:22 pm UTC (link)
Very intriguing start to your new story. Thank you for sharing it.

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[info]angiepen
2008-10-16 04:15 pm UTC (link)
Thank you for reading -- I'm glad you're enjoying it! :D

Angie

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[info]delphinapterus
2008-10-16 04:05 pm UTC (link)
I really like how you're going between past and present. With just a few lines you really make Margaret's situation in regard to Orlando apparent and show how difficult her position is the "right" way for a slave to act vs. a mother want to protect her son. I'm very curious to see how Liam reacts to the kidnapping. He's a bit of a puzzle but it does seem like he'll be less than pleased by it.

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[info]angiepen
2008-10-16 04:17 pm UTC (link)
Thanks, I'm glad you like the back-and-forth flow of the story. :D Margaret is having a hard time, definitely; I think every slave parent with an attractive or engaging child probably feels the same way. [pets Margaret]

And no, Liam's not at all pleased by this. O_O

Angie

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[info]ireth06
2008-10-16 05:24 pm UTC (link)
I really love the whole set up!
I checked out the FAQ and it does help

CAn't wait to see where you take this!
Thanks for sharing hun!
*hugs*

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[info]angiepen
2008-10-16 05:30 pm UTC (link)
Thanks, hon! There's a lot of really awesome fic being written in this universe. I'm enjoying it all, even the stories written about actors from shows I've never seen. :D

I'm glad you're enjoying -- the next chapter is up.

Angie

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[info]spae
2008-10-16 07:07 pm UTC (link)
I waited a bit to read this one in case it was in any way similar to mine, but that fear's allayed - and it's terribly intriguing!

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[info]angiepen
2008-10-16 07:10 pm UTC (link)
Awesome! So you're going to write yours after all then? :D

And thanks, glad you like it!

Angie

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[info]anne_squires
2008-10-17 12:49 am UTC (link)
Wow! This is so interesting. And exciting. My heart is beating a mile a minute. Awesome first chapter.

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[info]angiepen
2008-10-17 01:00 am UTC (link)
Thanks, I'm glad you're enjoying it! :D

Angie

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[info]gypsyluv
2008-10-17 01:00 am UTC (link)
I freakin' adore Liam... and the thought of him and Orli... *bursts into flames*

Then there is my dearest Johnny! If he's in a fic you bet our arse I'm reading it!

So... I read and so far I am in love!
I'm not familiar with the verse, but I get the story so far and once I'm done I am sure I'll go check out the others in the verse.

This is fantastic btw... usualy stories that jump back and forth in time confuzell me but this doesn't.. you've done a great job keeping it straight!

I'm of for chapter two now..

Hugs you!
Carla

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[info]angiepen
2008-10-17 01:03 am UTC (link)
I have to admit that Johnny's not a major character in this story, but he shows up around the edges, in a few places. :) And yes, bursting into flames is an appropriate response to the concept of Liam/Orlando. :D

I'm glad the back-and-forthing is working for you; I was a bit worried about that at first, but I thought going in strict chrono order and having it be six or eight chapters before the actual story got started would be worse. [laugh/flail] Everyone who's commented seems to like it, though, which is great.

Thanks! [hugz back]

Angie

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[info]lenalove
2008-10-19 07:15 pm UTC (link)
It's been way too long since we had a nice long fic from you to sink our teeth into. I am loving the complexity of this one. :D

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[info]angiepen
2008-10-19 11:03 pm UTC (link)
Thanks, hon! I'm glad you're enjoying it. :D

Angie

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[info]dragonmad
2008-11-09 02:46 am UTC (link)
Couldn't wait any longer.

*races off to read next chapter!!!!!* XD

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[info]angiepen
2008-11-09 03:10 am UTC (link)
Enjoy. :D

Angie

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[info]stormatdusk
2008-12-08 06:13 am UTC (link)
not a man with whom any but his peers would presume, and he had few peers

ooo, nice line. and nice premise. there is no way on earth i'll get to the verse anytime soon, so i'm going to have a go at this story on its own. if the first chapter is any indication, i'll 'get it' just fine! :)

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[info]angiepen
2008-12-08 06:23 am UTC (link)
Awesome. :D Enjoy! [wave/hugz]

Angie

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