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Fic: A Lost Boy, Chapter 2
Title: A Lost Boy
Author: AngiePen
Pairing: Liam Neeson/Orlando Bloom, minor Liam/Johnny Depp, plus a few other pair-ups among the supporting characters
Rating: NC-17 overall
Summary: Slave Orlando's been taken and the kidnappers aren't interested in ransom. And of course Master Liam's thundering rage is only at the personal insult, that someone would disrespect him by daring to touch his property.
Disclaimer: I don't own anyone you recognize. I know nothing about their social lives or sexual activities, more's the pity. This is fiction, period. It is done as a labor of love and I make no money from it.
Notes: 1) Set in [info]poisontaster's Kept Boy universe. See Chapter 1 for more notes.

Previous Chapter: One



[Twenty-Four Years Ago]

Liam headed out the back door with half a dozen warm cookies in one hand and a briefcase in the other. There were few fine days in January, even in Almaden, and after the previous week's freeze he meant to enjoy the sunshine outside on the deck. He might even get some work done.

He was barely halfway across the lawn when he felt a tug on one trouser leg. He looked around, then down.

"Orlando." He grinned down at the little boy, and got a matching grin in return. "Done with your chores?"

Orlando gave him an enthusiastic nod. "I got all the rocks out of the herb patch so Samantha can plant -- she's gonna show me how but not till tomorrow -- and I weeded around the rosemary bush. I can go really fast now."

"I'll bet you can. I don't suppose your nose led you to these cookies?"

"You have cookies?" Orlando's smile brightened and he craned his head back and forth while trotting along, trying to keep up and see around to Liam's other hand at the same time.

"What, you didn't know? I suppose you just wanted my company, then?"

Orlando nodded. "You're hardly ever here. You just got home yesterday and Mama said you're leaving again on Monday."

Liam climbed the three broad steps up to the deck, Orlando still clinging to his trouser leg. "Well, I suppose since I'm not around to spoil you very often, I might give you a cookie if you're good."

"Thank you, Master!"

The deck spread out in a curve, surrounded on three sides by grass -- dry and brown at this time of year -- and approached by a tamped gravel path Liam usually ignored. The fourth side extended over the lake, and half of the deck was covered with a lanai of narrow boards overhead, giving partial shade. Liam settled down on a comfortably padded bench on the sunny side of the deck, with a good view of the lake and the surrounding scrubby woods. Orlando sank to his knees at Liam's feet, his back straight and his palms up on his thighs.

Maggie never did that, and wouldn't have taught Orlando a body-slave's present position, so the boy must've been watching Johnny, and maybe the body-slaves of various guests who'd passed through. There were a few places around that barn of a mansion where a small boy could watch the grown-ups without being seen; Liam had used them when he was that age.

He said, "Very good," and handed Orlando one of the cookies. He got a "Thank you!" back and a quick hug around one knee, and the boy even managed to eat his cookie without getting crumbs all over himself.

Liam opened his briefcase and took out a stapled packet. He settled back with the draft contract in one hand and a cookie in the other, the other four stacked on his right knee. Orlando, having demonstrated his (new?) skill and gotten his reward, stayed kneeling but leaned forward, with his arms crossed on Liam's left thigh and his chin propped on his arms, apparently content to just look out over the lake and watch the ducks. Liam was content to leave him be.



[Today]

A bolt cutter took care of the collar. Two down.

It was a nice one, a series of curved, square plates jointed together, in a warm gold that accented the slave's olive skin. The plates were small enough to be comfortable -- it wasn't a posture collar or anything like it -- but wide enough for each plate to have an engraved scrollwork design around the edge, surrounding a sunburst with a circle around it. Or maybe an oval. Whatever. All the important info was inside, in the electronics buried in one of the plates.

Not that Marton cared. Neither the slave's name nor the master's name mattered at all.

The van pulled into the loading bay behind their building, one of a string of rented properties they'd used over the last four and a half years since Marton had come up with the routine. They could pack and move out thoroughly on half an hour's notice, or quickly enough not to leave any evidence which would directly identify any of them within eight minutes.

Sheen hopped out of the van carrying all the plastic grocery bags with everything that'd been on the slave, including the crunched remains of the chip, got into a non-descript Ford and pulled out before the bay doors rolled down. They'd taken the cash from the wallet; Sheen would discard everything else the slave'd had on him in ten different grocery sacks, in ten different trash bins and dumpsters in six different cities to the northeast and northwest, up either side of the bay. Even if this location was compromised, no search of the surrounding neighborhood -- a run-down industrial park in north San Jose -- would turn up any evidence of the slave, or of the two others they'd grabbed since setting up here.

Marton hauled the slave out of the back of the van while Brendan ran to get the gurney. They strapped him onto it, ignoring his weak twitching and whining.

He'd already swabbed the incision where the chip had come out with alcohol, but he'd do a better job now of cleaning it out and making sure it closed without a scar.

Next he'd take care of the brand. Remove the branded skin, all the way down through the dermis, and glue in a patch of synthetic grow-matrix. The fine mesh protected the open area while encouraging skin cells to grow all across the surface at once, rather than from the outside in. The protein the matrix was composed of would be absorbed as the new skin grew. Within a few weeks, if he did it properly and everything went well, the patch would heal up perfectly.

There were other methods for dealing with the tattoo he'd noticed on the slave's abdomen. A cut and some scraping and maybe a bit of solvent, then glue the incision and it should be invisible within ten days, two weeks at the outside. He'd be able to tell within a few days whether the result would be acceptable; if not, there'd still be time to patch it.

Simple procedures, and much more lucrative than slaving for an HMO ever had been. And without all the insurance and licensing shit, either.



[Twenty Years Ago]

"But why do you have to go so soon? You just got here." Liam could tell Orlando was trying not to whine, but he was eleven and whining came fairly naturally. The boy was making a good effort, though, so Liam only smacked him on the back of the head. He even answered his question.

"I have to go to New York and see about some people who are trying to steal one of my companies."

Orlando startled at the smack, but didn't make a noise or even rub his head. He hung onto his fishing pole and just hunched his shoulders a bit. "How can someone steal a whole company?" he asked. His voice was lower and a bit closer to a proper slave's neutral tone this time. Even though a proper slave wouldn't have asked in the first place.

Liam shifted in his chair, a padded, folding number made specially for campers and fishermen. They were out on a pier, near a shaded pool along one arm of the lake, where there were some decent trout who occasionally deigned to nibble on one's bait. Orlando was sitting on the edge of the pier, his bare feet dangling off the end, leaning back against Liam's knee.

"It's done with bribery and proxies and shell corporations," Liam said, not expecting Orlando to understand a word, but thinking he might get the gist of it. He was right.

Orlando turned and gave him a fierce glare. "They're cheating!"

"Essentially, yes." There were definitely some illegalities involved, as well as breaches of ethics on the part of several parties. Proving it in court, or to the Bar Association, would be difficult. Liam preferred a more direct approach, and had made plans to pursue one.

Apparently Orlando agreed.

"You should smash them," he said firmly.

Liam had to chuckle at that. "You've been watching too many cartoons, I think. You're starting to sound like a villain."

"I am not!" Orlando insisted, apparently too caught up in his protest to notice that he'd directly contradicted his master. "They're the ones cheating! They're trying to steal something that's yours! You should beat them up!"

He knew he should chastise the boy. Punish him, even. But he also knew from experience that Orlando was smart enough to confine his more outrageous outbursts to times when they were alone; even at eleven he knew that much. And since there was therefore no possibility of the boy embarassing him before anyone else, Liam didn't see any particular reason to smack down such a staunch supporter.

Besides, he agreed wholeheartedly.

"Perhaps I will," was all he said. Orlando gave a satisfied nod and turned his attention back to his fishing.



[Today]

Margaret leaned out the kitchen door and called, "Samantha?"

"Yes, Mama?" Samantha was stripping leaves off the last of the basil, except for the two best plants from that year, which she'd let go to seed. She stood up and wiped her sleeve across her forehead -- even mid-morning in October, the work was warming enough to get her sweating -- then headed over to see what her mother wanted, taking the half-full basket with her.

"Have you seen Orlando? He should've been back over an hour ago."

Samantha frowned. "No, I haven't."

"Do you think he might be down at the stable?" Her mother sounded dubious, but was clearly working herself into a fret.

"I can't imagine he would," Samantha said. "Not with groceries in the car, perishables. That'd be stupid. Orlando's thoughtless at times but he's not stupid."

"No, not usually." Margaret bit her lip and stared off in the direction of the road. They couldn't see it from the kitchen door, but Samantha could imagine her mother hoping to hear the car, rehearsing a good scold for whatever had delayed Orlando.

They both stood there for a few seconds, staring off at nothing, then Margaret whispered, "What if something happened?"

Samantha draped an arm around her mother's shoulders and squeezed. "If he had an accident, someone would've called. Or they will soon."

Margaret nodded, but didn't relax at all. She turned and looked up at the kitchen ceiling, in the direction of the Master's office where he'd be at work by now, on the phone and the computer, possibly both at once. "I should tell the Master."

"No, not yet." Samantha's hand clutched at her mother's shoulder. "Wait another hour. There might've been something, an accident, something that blocked traffic. There's no reason to just assume Orlando's been hurt. The fact that no one's called is good news -- there's no reason to disturb the Master yet."

"He'll be more angry if we wait."

"Only if there's reason. Please? Another half hour at least?" Samantha didn't often beg her mother for anything, but she was getting frightened. Master Liam in a rage was terrifying and she was still hoping that it would turn out to be nothing, that Orlando would drive up any minute now with a story about road repair or something that'd backed up traffic for miles between the estate and the shopping center where they got groceries.

He had to be all right.

Next Chapter: Chapter Three



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[info]twicet
2008-10-16 05:33 pm UTC (link)
Love the little flash backs,they really help in setting the story. Great chapter and I so hope Samantha alerts Liam soon.

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[info]angiepen
2008-10-16 05:37 pm UTC (link)
Thanks. :D And yes, Liam's going to know very soon.

Angie, hunting around for earmuffs....

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[info]rawiyaparand
2008-10-16 05:55 pm UTC (link)
Aaah! Little Orlando is too cute for words. If he's grown up to be half as cute, I can totally see why Liam's gonna be PISSED.

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[info]angiepen
2008-10-16 06:02 pm UTC (link)
He's just as cute now, with a good dollop of "wonderfully sexy" added into the mix. :) "Pissed" only begins to describe it.

Thanks!

Angie

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[info]vienna80er
2008-10-16 05:58 pm UTC (link)
Intriguing plot! I'm looking forward to more.

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[info]angiepen
2008-10-16 06:02 pm UTC (link)
Thanks, I'm glad you're enjoying it! :D

Angie

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[info]ai_hen
2008-10-16 06:20 pm UTC (link)
O o, at first I thought Marton was freeing slaves and doing a good thing. Now I am not so sure, Liam seemed to be very fond of young Orlando. I can't imagine that Orlando wanted this to happen.

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[info]angiepen
2008-10-16 07:02 pm UTC (link)
No, Marton's definitely in it for the money. Although I'm trying to fit in an "X Years Ago" post from Marton's POV to show where he got the idea, 'cause it's kinda twisted. :)

And you're right, Orlando's going to be frantic when next he's coherent enough to figure out what's going on. [pets Orlando]

Angie

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[info]lillian13
2008-10-16 06:43 pm UTC (link)
These guys sound like the PETA folks who steal animals from labs, take off their collars, and "set them free", because, yeah, something that's lived in a cage all its life can immediately take care of itself in the wild...

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[info]angiepen
2008-10-16 07:04 pm UTC (link)
You know, that's... yeah, that's a very cool idea. [cogitate] I might snag it for a side-plot, if you don't mind. :)

But you're right, that wouldn't work very well, especially with slaves like Orlando who've never been free. :/

Angie

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[info]lillian13
2008-10-16 07:32 pm UTC (link)
Feel free to use; glad to be of service... ;-)

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[info]angiepen
2008-10-16 07:39 pm UTC (link)
Thank you. :D

Angie

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[info]spae
2008-10-16 07:24 pm UTC (link)
Hee ... the plot thickens! I do like this storyline awesomely much!

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[info]angiepen
2008-10-16 07:31 pm UTC (link)
Thanks! It'll definitely be getting kinda hefty before it wraps. :D

Angie

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[info]ireth06
2008-10-16 07:29 pm UTC (link)
I love the flash backs, gives us a good insight on Orlando's character (not really taught to be a 'real' slave) and also on Liam's character (His feelings towards Orlando)

Love it!

Thanks for sharing, hugs and kisses!

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[info]angiepen
2008-10-16 07:37 pm UTC (link)
Exactly -- Orlando is a huge weak spot in Liam's usually harsh persona. He doesn't have the usual slave's protective barriers and would have an incredibly hard time if he were ever sold to another household. Which, of course, Liam had no intention of ever doing (and the though of getting hit by a bus or something never occurred to him) so he saw spoiling Orlando as a minor indulgence, one he could allow himself within the household, and a bit more when he and Orlando were alone.

Of course, it has nothing to do with his having any unseemly "feelings" for the boy. [cough] He's cute and a good companion, and he grew up to be excellent in bed. Permitting a slave who's so perfectly pleasing -- and isn't that what a slave is for after all? -- a few indulgences is only right. So long as he doesn't become lazy or disrespectful, and there's no danger of him ever embarassing Liam with his behavior, there's no harm in it. He pleases Liam and Liam allows him a few treats, which gives the boy a reason to remain pleasing. It's all very logical, really.

Angie, humming innocently

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[info]doylebaby
2008-10-16 08:10 pm UTC (link)
Orlando as a wee one is very cute, he and Liam seem to fit from the beginning. THe removal of the brand sounds quite painful. It means no one will know who he really belongs to... :(

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[info]angiepen
2008-10-16 08:17 pm UTC (link)
Orlando is adorable from Day One, and he and Liam definitely clicked together. In a purely status-appropriate way, of course. ;;)

It means no one will know who he really belongs to... :(

The brand itself just says "This is a slave." It's the microchip, and the chip in his collar, which actually identify him and could be used to tie him back to Liam as his legal owner.

But yes, Marton's removing anything which could identify Orlando as a slave or identify him or his master. [nod]

Thanks for commenting! :D

Angie

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[info]liriel1810
2008-10-16 08:52 pm UTC (link)
The flashbacks really show us a lot about how the relationship grew between Orlando and Liam, thereby giving a valid reason for Liam to go mad when Orlando goes missing.

I just hope the delay in notifying Liam that Orlando isn't there won't prove too costly.

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[info]angiepen
2008-10-16 08:59 pm UTC (link)
Thanks, I'm glad the flashbacks are working well. :D

About the delay, of course we know that they shouldn't have waited, but realistically it wouldn't have made any difference. :( Once the van was out of the parking lot and disappeared into traffic -- and especially, once Marton smashed Orlando's chip -- there wasn't much anyone could have done beyond what they'll be doing as soon as the household catches on. Half an hour wouldn't have helped any. Which doesn't mean they're not going to feel awful about it. [hugs Margaret and Samantha]

Angie

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[info]dramagirl007
2008-10-16 08:52 pm UTC (link)
This story is wonderful and I love the flash backs, I'm glad Master Liam treats his slaves fairly, well it sounds like he treats Orlando and his family fairly, I hope he treats the others fairly as well. Keep up the good work and please update ASAP. :)

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[info]angiepen
2008-10-16 09:09 pm UTC (link)
Liam is a complicated character, and I feel like I'm writing him on a very narrow ledge, if that makes sense. He's not a bad master, but he's not an overly good one either. He's indulgent toward Orlando, for reasons he could explain very rationally in the unlikely event that he ever decided someone else deserved any sort of explanation at all for his actions. The others don't get the same amount of leeway Orlando does, though, not even close. He's not cruel or terribly harsh, but he's exacting and has no tolerance whatsoever for incompetence or slacking off, whether in his slaves or his free employees and associates.

He's also nowhere within several nautical miles of being an abolitionist -- which makes him at least sort of a Bad Guy from our POV, but to Liam, slavery exists in the world and it seems to work as well as anything and better than other things society has tried. It's better than having millions of people begging in the streets or turning to crime because of poverty, for example, and if there are abuses, well, he's read his history and knows there were abuses and terrible things happening to poor free people long before slavery was brought back.

Of course there are all sorts of holes in that argument [cough] but Liam judges everyone by himself, and doesn't tend to fret too much about things on the scale of How Society Works. The world is as it is, and he works hard to get what he wants from it, while living up to his own standards.

Hopefully he'll eventually coalesce into someone most of the readers like while recognizing his flaws. [crossed fingers]

Thanks for commenting, and more tomorrow. :D

Angie

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[info]dramagirl007
2008-10-16 09:33 pm UTC (link)
Wow you put a lot of thought into your character. You probably have most of the story done and are posting each chapter one a day. I kind of do that with my stories that I write on a different site. Good job again :)

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[info]angiepen
2008-10-16 09:39 pm UTC (link)
Thanks. :D I do come up with a lot of detail about my characters (and plots), most of which never makes it into the stories, LOL! I like everything to fit together and make sense and feel well-rounded, though, and that means doing a lot of thinking and pondering and banging out notes into a file that no one else will ever see. I never outline my stories ahead of time, but I build up a huge pile of info and then wade through it while I write. :)

With longer stories, I usually (mean to) finish and then just post after, but in this case I was boinging all over and wanted to actively join the party, and besides my husband and I are going on a cruise in a little less than a week and internet charges on shipboard are amazingly insane, so I wanted to get as much done (hopefully the whole thing but we'll see [crossed fingers]) before I leave. Right now I'm almost done with Chapter Six.

Angie

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[info]wickhouse2005
2008-10-17 12:48 am UTC (link)
I am enjoying the Kept verse from this point of view. The majority of owners must assume that they have the right to be owners. While I sympathize with the abolitionist's owners, I also find the 'right to own' viewpoint interesting. Particularly when the owner isn't particularly evil just living with the assumption of right.

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[info]angiepen
2008-10-17 12:54 am UTC (link)
Yes, me too. [nod] And I think most owners would be there in the middle, not Cruel-N-Evol but not Abolitionist-Good either. The extremes are interesting to explore and I'm enjoying the stories about the good guys trying to figure out how best to actually help, and hopefully some day we'll get someone who actually wants to write about Lord Cruise and his ilk [grin] but the people in the middle -- who are just living in the world as it is and all the privilege they were born to or managed to wrest out of the economy -- are good story-fodder too. I'm glad you're enjoying. :D

Angie

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[info]thessaliad
2008-10-16 10:26 pm UTC (link)
I am totally loving this community! And I bet there's a real premium on the black market for a young, fully-trained bodyslave with no papers or ID. I'm sure Commerce takes a tremendous cut of all sales, and stealing a slave has to be way cheaper than training on up yourself. Not to mention the export market for a high-class American slave. Keep going!

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[info]angiepen
2008-10-16 10:29 pm UTC (link)
No more bunnies! No more! [laugh/flail]

Yes, I'm sure there's a thriving black market (and now you've got me wanting to write about it [headdesk]) but that's not quite what Marton's involved with. ;D

Angie

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[info]anne_squires
2008-10-17 01:12 am UTC (link)
All right, this story is fantastic. But... whimpers... and looks at the cliff hanger. The big, bad cliff hanger.

I love the flashbacks, the glimpses of Orlando growing up. The developing master/slave relationship with Liam is very interesting.

I hope Liam can find him again, somehow.

Just enjoying this so much. Enjoying, but also worrying too.

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[info]angiepen
2008-10-17 01:31 am UTC (link)
I'm afraid this is going to be one big string of cliffhangers. [duck] The main plotline is what's happening to Orlando, and Liam's efforts to find him and get him back and kick the crap out of whoever took him, so that whole thread is going to wind its way through the story and won't wrap until the end. Sorry! :)

I'm glad you're enjoying their developing relationship, though. Orlando adores Liam, of course. Liam finds Orlando amusing and thinks he's a good companion and an excellent body-slave, but of course he'd never succumb to something as gauche as a strong emotional attachment to a slave. [she said with a straight face]

For whatever excuse he can come up with, Liam is definitely going to ensure that Orlando is found, however long it takes.

Thanks!

Angie

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[info]gypsyluv
2008-10-17 01:31 am UTC (link)
I think Orlando is rooting himself in Liams heart little by little! I am so anxious to read more!
And I am so worried too...
This is just so damn good!
Will be waiting for more!
Hugs!
Carla

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[info]angiepen
2008-10-17 01:41 am UTC (link)
Oh, yeah, by the time of the "Today" scenes, Orlando's firmly taken up residence in Liam's heart, and has been there long enough to have painted and recarpeted a few times. :D Not that Liam would ever admit it, maybe not even to himself. [pokes Liam]

Thanks! {{}}

Angie

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[info]amygirl
2008-10-17 01:41 am UTC (link)
I'm really loving this fic. I adore the universe you've created in it -- it's really rich and vibrant.

Young!Orlando is too cute for words. :-)

I adore the relationship between Liam and Orlando. Yeah I know that Liam sees it in very black and white terms and probably doesn't see it as a relationship at all (and technically it really isn't in the pure sense of the word) but that doesn't mean it's a horrible thing. Orlando's healthy and probably happy and so what's wrong with that really. True it's the only life he's ever known but that doesn't make it a bad one. Besides I have a feeling that Liam's view on things is going to change once he finds out Orlando is gone. Maybe not fully but...there will be some bending I'm sure... ;-)

I'm worried about this whole Now-storyline with Orlando. Really worried...but in a good way. More please.

And thank you for making this readable without having to read the other story to understand what's going on. I just don't like Jensen enough to read fic about him...

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[info]angiepen
2008-10-17 01:54 am UTC (link)
I have to give credit for most of the universe-creating to [info]poisontaster and [info]darkrosetiger, but I'm glad you like it, and I'll say thanks for your appreciation of the chunks I've created myself. :D I'm definitely having fun pulling out canon-in-a-can whenever I need something new, and PT has been awesome (and very flexible) about letting folks be creative in her sandbox.

Liam's in pretty strong denial, yeah. He values his dignity pretty highly and people who fall in love with their body-slaves are pathetic and ridiculous. :) I honestly don't know how much of his outer attitude is going to change; we'll have to see how it goes as the story progresses.

More tomorrow. [nod] I'm trying to figure out how often to post. I don't want to overrun my margin, but OTOH I need to get this done before NaNo starts (I really don't want to have it go on hiatus for all of November [hides]) and the spousal unit and I are going on a cruise starting next week, and I also don't want to be spending too much time doing cross-posts and all from shipboard -- internet connection is ma$$ively expensive at sea. So we'll see how the next few days of writing go and whether I can see an ending by the end of the weekend. [crossed fingers]

I've never seen Supernatural, but I'm enjoying the Jensen stories very much. It's a matter of preference, though. [nod] If you like the Stargate: Atlantis guys, you might try [info]darkrosetiger's stories, or [info]telesilla is writing about Dylan Neal and Kyle Schmid from Blood Ties. Lots of good stuff. :) But yeah, I prefer my stories to be readable individually so far as possible, especially when the whole universe is going cross-fandom like this.

Thanks, hon! [hugz]

Angie

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[info]gypsy_atavari
2008-10-17 03:56 am UTC (link)
Intriguing concept. Looking forward to more. :-)

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[info]angiepen
2008-10-17 06:24 am UTC (link)
Thanks! More tomorrow. :)

Angie

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[info]lomer
2008-10-17 03:57 am UTC (link)
This is a really interesting start! I'm enjoying watching the plot unfold. *g*

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[info]angiepen
2008-10-17 06:25 am UTC (link)
Thank you! I'm glad you're having fun reading. :D

Angie

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[info]mistry89
2008-10-17 06:15 am UTC (link)
Oh noes!
As interesting as it would be without them, the flashbacks add such a lot to our understanding (and feeling as if we know, and therefore care about) Orlando and the many dangers he faces - even if nothing awfully awful happens to him (which is ones of the many things we don't know).
Phew!
Thank you :)

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[info]angiepen
2008-10-17 06:26 am UTC (link)
I'm glad the flashbacks are working. I felt the story really needed that info, but that just writing it in strict chronological order it'd take way too long for the actual story to begin.

Thanks!

Angie

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[info]thetammyjo
2008-10-17 04:26 pm UTC (link)
I like the way your are weaving the past with the present.

It is so easy to do this in a confusing way but you have done it clearly.

TammyJo

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[info]angiepen
2008-10-17 04:57 pm UTC (link)
Thanks, I'm glad you're enjoying it. :)

Angie

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[info]fiesty_red
2008-10-17 06:12 pm UTC (link)
I love the relationship you are portraying between Liam and Orlando in the flashbacks. It is not the usual Master/Slave deal, but endearing...and even Liam seems to realize that. I can only imagine the rage Liam will feel once he finds out about Orlando. O.O

Lovely chapter!

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[info]angiepen
2008-10-17 06:14 pm UTC (link)
Wait, what?! Are you implying that there's anything weak or unseemly or undignified about Liam's dealings with any of his slaves?? o_O

Hee!

You're right, of course, but he'd never admit it. And the next chapter is up, so you can see just how angry he gets. :)

Thanks!

Angie

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[info]fiesty_red
2008-10-22 04:47 pm UTC (link)
Ha! Of course Liam has a heart! He may be a lion, but underneath that brawn, he's a softy. ;)

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[info]angiepen
2008-10-23 10:06 pm UTC (link)
Just try getting him to admit it, though. :D

Angie

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[info]fiesty_red
2008-10-24 01:22 pm UTC (link)
LOL! Such a prideful, prideful man. *shakes head* ;)

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[info]illuminated_sin
2008-10-28 01:13 am UTC (link)
*worries!*

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[info]angiepen
2008-10-29 02:13 am UTC (link)
[pets]

Angie

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