AngiePen ([info]angiepen) wrote,
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Fic: A Lost Boy, Chapter 9
Title: A Lost Boy
Author: AngiePen
Pairing: Liam Neeson/Orlando Bloom, minor Liam/Johnny Depp, plus a few other pair-ups among the supporting characters.
Rating: NC-17 overall
Summary: Slave Orlando's been taken and the kidnappers aren't interested in ransom. And of course Master Liam's thundering rage is only at the personal insult, that someone would disrespect him by daring to touch his property.
Disclaimer: I don't own anyone you recognize. I know nothing about their social lives or sexual activities, more's the pity. This is fiction, period. It is done as a labor of love and I make no money from it.
Notes: 1) Set in [info]poisontaster's Kept Boy universe -- FAQ here. See Chapter 1 for more notes.

Previous Chapters: One, Two, Three, Four, Five, Six, Seven, Eight



[Eight Years Ago]

Master Liam reached down a hand toward Orlando, who was sitting cross-legged on the floor next to him. The hand was empty, so he wanted something. Orlando'd been paying attention to the dinner meeting going on around the table, so he knew his master wanted the dossier on Mr. Taylor, the man the opposition was pushing for Chairman of the Board of SilicaSystems. Orlando slid it out of the perfectly organized briefcase, which was perched on his lap, and put it into his master's hand. The meeting flowed on, punctuated by the clink of silverware on china and the occasional dull tap of fine crystal on the tablecloth when someone put down a glass.

The next time his master's hand reached down, it had a fork in it with a chunk of rare steak. Orlando leaned forward and took the bite of meat, chewing while he sorted through the pages of SilicaSystems' corporate charter, looking for a clause he remembered from one of their prep sessions.

They'd spent days holed up in Master's office at home, Master and Orlando, with Johnny, who'd been travelling all week making personal contact with allies and fence-sitters, often contributing over the phone or through e-mail. They'd collected and sorted information and sounded out other board members and shareholders, trying to build a block of votes before flying out to Triangle Park for the stockholders' meeting. The vote was the next morning, and Master Liam and other major shareholders who favored Mr. MacAllister as the new Chairman were having one last work session before the morning meeting

Orlando touched his master's thigh and held up the correct charter page with his thumb pointing at the relevant clause. Master Liam took it from him, stared at it for a few moments, then ruffled Orlando's hair in approval and dove back into the swirl of strategizing.

All of which was pretty well representative of Orlando's life for the previous five years. It was exhausting at times, but he could count the days each year when he was away from his master on the fingers of one hand, and usually with fingers left over; that made all the paperwork and travel and late nights -- including too many of the other kind of late nights, where they were just working and there was hardly time for Orlando to give his master a blowjob to help him sleep before dropping off in exhaustion himself -- worth it. It was much better than being left at home like a little kid.

While sitting on the floor (carpeted, thick, good padding -- body-slaves quickly became experts on carpets and flooring) waiting for his next cue that Master needed something, he caught a smug look from Mr. Clooney's body-slave. He raised an eyebrow at the pampered twit and stared him down.

Matt was a body-slave and only a body-slave. He knelt on the floor next to his master's chair, half curled up in his lap, getting pets from his master and treats from the table and contributing nothing at all to the meeting except his reasonably cute presence. Mr. Clooney had a personal assistant, a free woman named Ms. Margulies who sat at the table with the other free people and actually did work. Matt seemed to think doing nothing but sit on the floor and look cute was some kind of privilege, but Orlando knew better. In the four years since he'd first met Mr. Clooney, at another business meeting similar to this one, the man had gone through three other body-slaves before Matt. Ms. Margulies had been with him the entire time, and from what Orlando'd picked up listening to random remarks, she'd been with him for around twenty years.

Mr. Clooney and Ms. Margulies might or might not've been fucking, but obviously doing nothing for Mr. Clooney but get fucked by him wasn't the way to hold his attention. Matt would learn. If he had any luck, when Mr. Clooney got around to selling him next month or next year, he'd find a master half as good as Orlando's.

Mr. Sinclair -- no, Lord Sinclair now, and Orlando had better remember it -- still owned Karl, and had him keeping notes and tallies on a white board on one wall. The restaurant was accustomed to having business meetings among the private gatherings in its back rooms and was willing to provide (for a fee, which Orlando had negotiated) all sorts of meeting-type amenities.

Lord Sinclair had been kind enough to ask after Orlando's health when they'd first arrived. He always did, the few times a year he and Master Liam got together for business or occasionally pleasure. Orlando had the impression that Lord Sinclair felt bad about his gutter collapsing.

Not that he cared about Orlando personally; he'd probably have felt just as bad if a piece of his house had fallen and injured one of Master Liam's horses. Lord Sinclair was ambitious and finally gaining that title he'd wanted hadn't slown him down. Lord Neeson was a valuable friend to have; being at least partially responsible for his body-slave breaking his back would probably make anyone a little tense and eager to curry a bit of extra favor.

Orlando handed up the packet of recent financials for three other companies Mr. MacAllister was involved with. Two had been doing well and the third had been a trainwreck long before he'd joined the organization, but there were fewer wrecked cars now than there'd been before he'd taken over; he was obviously a competent manager. Or maybe he just knew how to hire competent help -- either one was valuable.

Master Liam took the packet and handed down a chunk of roasted potato. Orlando bit it neatly off his master's fork and focused back on his work.



[Today]

"I'm sorry, My Lord, I haven't found any more of Orlando's effects. There was never much hope for the clothing, honestly."

"What do you have for me, then?" Lord Neeson's question was a sharp snap, and carried the clear assumption that there would be progress of some sort to relate. Thewlis was very happy to have something because this was not a man he cared to disappoint.

He might have to eventually and that wasn't a happy thought. There were still a couple of possibilities, but he was beginning to think that the slave was probably dead, or near enough. Until he had proof of that, however, his current employer was paying a ridiculous amount to guarantee Thewlis's exclusive attention, and he was more than willing to cash the checks and pound the pavement.

"I found both people who took the keyring and the collar to the pawn shops. Both items were found in dumpsters, one behind a small grocery and the other in an industrial park. I questioned both parties and am satisfied that they did indeed simply find the items. The young lady who found the keyring is homeless and was going through the grocery's dumpster looking for discarded produce and such. The gentleman who was searching the industrial park dumpster is a metal artist -- he welds bits together into sculptures and finds people to buy them. Neither came across as either too jittery or too smooth."

Lord Neeson scowled and nodded. "What else?"

"I've been talking to some people, trying to find leads on other slaves who've vanished. I have contacts in a few police departments and I've asked around among people I know who work for those such as yourself who own large numbers of slaves. There's a reluctance to stick to the topic, however."

"So will they talk to you or not?"

"On this subject, mostly not. Information on the disposition of slaves must go strictly through Commerce, and Commerce will assure anyone who asks that there are never any successful escapes, that all runaway slaves are tracked down eventually and set to less desirable but more secure tasks."

"Orlando is not a runaway." Lord Neeson glared at him and his voice was hard enough to cut diamond. Oddly enough, Thewlis believed him.

Normally that would've been his first assumption, particularly with a master this harsh. In fact, he had assumed it when he'd begun investigating. He'd been given a free hand to speak with any of the slaves or free employees about the estate, however, and not with either Neeson or an agent lurking over his shoulder, and everyone he'd talked with had agreed that Orlando had adored his master and would have only left kicking and screaming. Happy as a cockroach with a restaurant dumpster all to itself, was how one of the house slaves had put it. Not terribly flattering, but definitely descriptive.

So assuming all these people who'd known the boy his entire life were correct, then he hadn't run away.

"So you've said, My Lord," he replied, bowing his head respectfully. "But Commerce has no category for 'stolen' slaves. There are only slaves in Commerce, slaves contracted out, slaves who've died in service, and the occasional runaway who is always brought back, although not always alive, and if so is rarely living for long after. That's the party line."

"Obviously bullshit," said Neeson with a scowl. "Orlando can't have been the first slave in modern history to have ever been stolen."

"Clearly not," Thewlis agreed. "But consider, they have a vested interest in making sure everyone knows, for a fact, that runaways are always found and punished. There's no way to tell the difference between a successful runaway and a theft, therefore thefts don't exist any more than successful runaways do."

"At least not officially." Neeson looked both angry and thoughtful, with his jaw tight and his fingers tapping on his desk. "And I doubt they'd say anything different even if I asked myself."

"Unfortunately not, My Lord. But you could perhaps speak with some of the other owners of your acquaintance? People who might be willing to discuss the subject with one of their own?"

Neeson looked thoughtful and frowned. "What exactly would I be asking them? What are we looking for, aside for the bare fact of another missing slave or two? Who might well have run away?"

"First of all, we're looking for signs indicating that they might not have run away. Your Orlando was apparently more content with his lot than most slaves, but there might well have been others who were not discontent enough to take the chance of being caught as runaways. As I said during our previous meeting, more thefts mean more evidence, which will make it that much more likely that we can track down the thieves."

"Fine. I'll ask around, then, and if I find any other signs of theft, I'll persuade the owners to talk to you, since you know what questions to ask."

"That would be excellent, if you could arrange it." Thewlis bowed his head again and thought about how best to make use of such a series of meetings. One-on-one might get the owners to speak more freely, but if they could manage a group meeting with a number of people who'd had slaves stolen, listening to the others speaking could trigger memories and produce more information.

"What are the chances that this was aimed specifically at me?"

"My lord?" Thewlis changed mental gears and wondered what Lord Neeson was thinking. He was obvious more upset than he cared to let on, but might someone have counted on... on what? The fact that stealing his body-slave might throw him off his game? That seemed rather a long shot.

"Orlando was privy to all of my business dealings, and has been for a dozen years."

Ahh, now that was an interesting possibility. "Is that commonly known?"

"Yes. He attends meetings with me and acts as my secretary. Johnny is competent to work alone and travels as my representative a good deal; Orlando is the one who's constantly by me and anyone who's done business with me would know it."

"Or anyone they've mentioned it to," Thewlis agreed with a nod. "So this might've been an act of business espionage, if a rival thinks they can get enough information out of the boy to make the risk worthwhile."

Neeson looked pained. "He wouldn't willingly betray me."

"Of course not, My Lord," Thewlis said, trying hard to sound reassuring. "But there are drugs which would do the job no matter how loyal your boy is."

"Drugs? Of course." Neeson looked relieved for a moment, and Thewlis could only imagine what he'd been thinking. The more physical forms of persuasion made for dramatic scenes in movies, but they were time-consuming and the information they produced was unreliable. Victims tended to tell torturers whatever they wanted to hear, rather than what was true.

If that was what Neeson had been thinking, however, then it was no wonder his appearance had suffered. His face was more lined than Thewlis remembered from their first meeting, there were dark smudges under his eyes, and there might have been a bit more silver in his hair. It was possible that if Orlando had adored his master, his master might well have adored him back. And a rival who'd noticed could have spotted a two-for-one deal on stealing the boy -- both whatever secrets and strategies they could get out of him, and whatever benefit they gained from distracting Neeson away from his business affairs.

Not that Thewlis would ever suggest such a thing aloud.

Next Chapter: Chapter Ten



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[info]fleshlycherry
2008-10-29 02:20 am UTC (link)
Nope, nope, nope. Thewlis would never suggest such a thing. Teehee!

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[info]angiepen
2008-10-29 02:37 am UTC (link)
Hey, no one's ever seriously accused Thewlis of being stupid. ;D Thanks!

Angie

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[info]lovelyhera
2008-10-29 02:52 am UTC (link)
Ha. I like that they're getting it wrong, now. Orlando wasn't stolen because of his master, he was just random. But obviously they have to investigate this lead, which wastes time, which means...ooohhh, what if Orlando has been resold by the time he's found and is all brainwashed? Mindfuck! This is shaping up to be a very intriguing story.

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[info]angiepen
2008-10-29 02:57 am UTC (link)
That's exactly it. [nodnod] They have no idea what's going on so they're thinking of every possibility they can come up with. [heavy, theatrical sigh]

Thanks for commenting!

Angie

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[info]mourning_night
2008-10-29 03:00 am UTC (link)
Of course Thewlis wouldn't say anything. You make me feel really badly for Liam. I'm bitting my nails in anticipation waiting to see what happens next. Really like the point about body-slaves becoming experts on carpets and flooring.

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[info]angiepen
2008-10-29 03:04 am UTC (link)
Thanks! :D Liam definitely needs some good cuddling, but of course he'd snarl at anyone who offered it. [sigh]

And yeah, I was writing the back-then scene and it just occurred to me that of course all the body slaves, who spend so much time on the floor, would become experts on floor coverings, heh. :D

Angie

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[info]gypsy_atavari
2008-10-29 03:10 am UTC (link)
Even the peripheral characters here are interesting. :-)

You're doing such an awesome job with the storytelling. I can't wait for more. :)

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[info]angiepen
2008-10-29 03:31 am UTC (link)
Thanks, hon! More in a few days -- we're going to be running around on tours for the next two... maybe three days? I don't even remember, LOL!

Angie

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[info]weepingnaiad
2008-10-29 03:15 am UTC (link)
I was so thrilled to see another chapter! Loved the scene with Orli on the floor. It really showed how much he had come and was so revealing. He was more than just a body for Liam to use.

I actually feel badly for Liam. He's obviously suffering, but wouldn't admit the true cause.

Of course, I'm dying to know how it's going with Orli!
*hugs*
WN

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[info]angiepen
2008-10-29 03:33 am UTC (link)
Orlando's definitely a bright boy, and Liam's discovered that he's definitely useful outside the bedroom. [nod] (Besides, I love hand-feeding and had to get a bit of that in somewhere. ;D )

And yeah, Liam's in really bad shape. :(

Thanks! More in a few days. :D

Angie

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[info]mistry89
2008-10-29 05:49 am UTC (link)
Am still intrigued about the "why" - slaves must be a dime a dozen, so the trafficking in "lost" slaves seems unnecessary. Mmmm, unless there are a lot of runaways (successful) and so Commerce's cover-up is far bigger than this one ring (making it mose decidely in Commerce's interest to "repatriate" those unlucky sods actually stolen. Or something ....

Thank you - like Thewlis a lot, a sceptic with an open mind :)

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[info]angiepen
2008-10-31 04:18 am UTC (link)
Slaves are actually pretty expensive; most people can't afford them at all. The impression I'm getting from the Creators of the Universe is that most slaves are owned by the super-rich individuals, and by companies and corporations. And my guess is that corporations own most of them.

Figure, owning a slave is like owning a horse. Big investment up front, and then you still have to feed it and take care of it and call in the vet doctor occasionally. Commerce frowns upon people who seriously mangle their slaves, so you have to keep up a minimum of care. (Allowing for logistics like someone actually complaining in case of violation, of course.)

And with Commerce's cover-up, it's more a matter of advertising and PR than super-secret cover-up. I might've presented that badly. :/ Think of it as like what the tobacco companies did for decades -- all the information about cancer and emphysema and strokes and heart attacks was out there, but the tobacco industry was still spending bazillions of dollars to convince folks that there now no "conclusive" evidence that smoking was a health hazard, and there were plenty of nicotine addicts who were willing to believe them because it was convenient for them to do so. It's like that. Everyone knows that slaves do escape completely every now and then, and anyone who thinks about it could probably figure out that yeah, slaves do get snatched sometimes. And the insurance companies (which pay out for slaves dead or disabled from accidents more than anything else) are set up to reimburse owners for theft, just like medical insurance in our world will write you checks for your emphysema after forty years of smoking. But that doesn't change the focus of the PR campaign, or make much difference in what the average person, who doesn't own slaves anyway and doesn't know anyone who does, think or believe.

And really, the main focus of the "Slaves Never Successfully Escape!" campaign is the slaves themselves. Keeping them all too afraid to even try is the best defense against runners. :/

And thanks, I'm glad you like Thewlis. He keeps insisting I give him more and more scenes. :D

Angie

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[info]liriel1810
2008-10-29 06:30 am UTC (link)
The early glimpses are now showing us just how valuable Orlando is. He's not just a pretty face and a willing body, he's got a very sharp mind too.

Maybe Liam and Thewlis need to stop and think that if the thieves wanted to get back at Liam for something, they'd turn Orlando in as a runaway slave, and from there he'd be mindwiped or killed or whatever they do with runaways... a much more fitting revenge than to just have the slave disappear.

I'm very worried that the longer it takes to find Orlando, the more Liam is going to lose it. He can't afford to have his emotions involved, but who is going to tell him he has to stop getting so bent because it's Orlando and/or a piece of his property, and think logically and clearly. Emotions are not going to find Orlando... save them for after, when he's safely returned.

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[info]angiepen
2008-10-31 04:31 am UTC (link)
Orlando's definitely smart and capable. [nodnod] It's canon that body-slaves usually act as Agents for their owners, and that when they age out of being body-slaves they often end up just being agents (as Johnny has), sort of like a PA in a business, but it seemed to me that some would be more capable than others. There've got to be some percentage of body-slaves who are gorgeous and great in bed but not too bright when it comes to business, you know? So I'm showing both kinds, as well as underscoring that Orlando's one of the ones who can do both.

if the thieves wanted to get back at Liam for something, they'd turn Orlando in as a runaway slave

You ever get the feeling you need to write like six or eight more fics, to use all the cool ideas your readers are giving you...? :D Between you and a few other folks, I keep thinking I'm going to have to write more and more stories in this verse, LOL! In fact, I have written one other and it'll go up as soon as I'm done with comments. [humming] But yeah, that's a cool idea. I don't imagine Commerce would be too terribly interested in releasing a slave back to its owner (who is really just a leasing the slave, if you read the FAQ) once it's a "proven" runaway. [evil pondering]

And you're right, Liam's having a hard time holding it together. I have a feeling he's going to come out of this a bit different than he went in. [pets Liam]

Angie

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[info]thessaliad
2008-10-29 06:31 am UTC (link)
Orli's captors are going to be in for it--we knew he was a fearless little monkey, but now we know that he's very smart. I can't wait to see how he handles himself.:)

And you posted again from the cruise! Woohoo!

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[info]angiepen
2008-10-31 04:31 am UTC (link)
Orlando definitely isn't giving up, and he has a few schemes. :D Thanks!

Angie

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thanks for new chapter
[info]skeptic7
2008-10-29 09:57 am UTC (link)
So thats how Commerce works: denial of everything but the party line. If there are never any escaped slaves, or stolen slaves, there would also never be anyone wrongfully enslaved or anyone whose past doesn't match Commerce's computer records. No wonder the other stolen slave had basically given up.
But if there aren't any escaped or stolen slaves, how does the insurance company record its payouts? ;)


Thanks so much for updating this. Its a very addictive story.

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Re: thanks for new chapter
[info]angiepen
2008-10-31 04:33 am UTC (link)
True, but also see my comment above to [info]mistry89. A lot of it is just advertising and posturing, with the goal of keeping the slaves too terrified to even try to escape. Prevention is the cheapest option, after all.

Thanks back for commenting. :D

Angie

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[info]christangel13
2008-10-29 05:22 pm UTC (link)
awwwwww.....
Neeson worries so much for his slave, he already has dark circles under his eyes.
And Orlando is really lucky to have such a master, which adores him more than anything else!!!

They obviously care so much for each other!
Just cute.....especially Neeson!(When he tries so hard to stay calmly and keep his composure)

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[info]angiepen
2008-10-31 04:34 am UTC (link)
Thanks, I think they're incredibly cute together too, even if Liam would thwap me for saying so. [grin]

Angie

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[info]vienna80er
2008-10-29 07:37 pm UTC (link)
Thanks so much for the update! I love the blends into the past and all the suspense more and more with each chapter.

Happy as a cockroach with a restaurant dumpster all to itself,... had me lol!

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[info]angiepen
2008-10-31 04:34 am UTC (link)
Hee, thanks! Glad you liked that bit. :D

Angie

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[info]gypsyluv
2008-10-29 08:01 pm UTC (link)
grrrrrrrrrr... I want to slap LJ! My first comment was ate somehow!

Anyways...

God this was a fantastic chapter!

I love how Orli see's his worth... even though he is a slave he knows that he is valued for more then just his bed skills! And even though the other slave is acting smug to him he feels compassion for him as he knows more then the other slave does of his own situation.

The detective is smarter and more perceptive then I thought, but man I want him to get on the ball! ... before something worse happens to our precious!

Thanks for the update!
I sooooo want Liam and Orli reunited!

Hugs
Carla

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[info]angiepen
2008-10-31 04:37 am UTC (link)
Yes, Orlando's still pretty young here, but he's been a slave all his life, even if he's been protected from so much of the ickiness of it all. He definitely knows a few things cute little Matt doesn't, though, but of course even if he had a chance to clue him in in private, Matt wouldn't believe him. Not a huge deal -- he'll learn.

And yeah, Thewlis is pretty sharp, but he really doesn't have much to work with. :/ We'll have to hope he turns up another clue or too RSN. [crossed fingers]

Thanks!

Angie

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[info]anne_squires
2008-10-30 01:21 am UTC (link)
"It was possible that if Orlando had adored his master, his master might well have adored him back."

I think Lord Neeson has been in denial about his true feelings for his slave for years and years. And if this kidnapping incident had never happened he would have been able to continue with his delusion. I think some reality about how he really feels is about to slap him in the face, if it hasn't already. So, in that sense the kidnapping could be a good thing....if Orlando comes back to Lord Neeson. Say he will come back someway, somehow.

Gah, I absolutely adore this story. Even if it does drive me crazy with worry.

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[info]angiepen
2008-10-31 04:39 am UTC (link)
I think Lord Neeson has been in denial about his true feelings for his slave for years and years.

Absolutely. [nodnod] And wait till you see the side-story I'm about to post, as soon as I'm done with comments here. [eyeroll] The fact that he's still the way he is after that shows that Liam's so far up that river in Africa, he's sub-Saharan. :P I think this experience is going to open his eyes to a few things, though. Whether or not he'll change on the outside, we'll have to see. :)

Thanks!

Angie

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Sub saharan
[info]skeptic7
2008-10-31 07:29 pm UTC (link)
Just because the universe is all screwed up, doesn't mean the people are all sociopaths. Liam obviously doesn't like change. Liam might not believe in universal emancipation or divine rights or civil liberties but he is not a monster. Look how much he is willing to do to accommadate Gretchen. She has the rank of "Head Gardner" even after most of the physical work has been delegated. She has the padded chairs and table in the kitchen, and the odd jobs in a place where she has company and a continuous supply of coffee and always someone around for emergencies.
Liam might be telling himself, and everyone else that he is harsh and demanding and callous, but there is no evidence of the last. It just doesn't fit into his self image to be dolting on anybody, and a slave should be as replaceable as a horse. How much do you want to bet his first pony died of old age still in Liam's stable?

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Re: Sub saharan
[info]angiepen
2008-11-01 04:28 am UTC (link)
How much do you want to bet his first pony died of old age still in Liam's stable?

I think you'd win that bet. :D

Angie

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[info]amygirl
2008-10-30 03:10 pm UTC (link)
Oh this is just...BRILLIANT. I loved that opening scene mostly because it shows how smart Orlando is. Which is something that I'm sure that makes him that much more interesting to Liam. If he was just a pretty face I don't think he would have been able to worm his way under Liam's skin quite so much. It's just a combination of things that made that happen. I also liked the note that Karl was still with with Harry. Just a nice little note even if there's nothing else to it.

I loved the second bit too...Liam's cracks are showing...probably only to those that really know him or that are trained to look for such things (like Thewlis is) but they're there. Very nice!

Edited at 2008-10-30 03:11 pm UTC

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[info]angiepen
2008-10-31 04:41 am UTC (link)
Definitely. If Orlando were just a cute little ditz, Liam's attention would've wandered a long time ago.

And yes, Liam knows a few other masters who've hung onto their body-slaves longer than usual. :) Just a couple, but the example is out there if he wants to notice it.

Liam's cracks are showing

Yep. He's going to be needing a serious spackle-job by the time this wraps. ;D Thanks, hon!

Angie

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[info]dramagirl007
2008-10-30 08:39 pm UTC (link)
When is Liam going to actually find Orlando? I love this story but this is driving me nuts, I wish Orlando was safe at home. Keep up the good work and please update ASAP. :)

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[info]angiepen
2008-10-31 04:43 am UTC (link)
I'm afraid it's going to be a while, hon. [hides under keyboard] Day after tomorrow I start working on NaNoWriMo, and this story goes on hiatus. I'm a few chapters ahead, and those will be posted, but I'm not going to finish by the end of the month. Sorry! :(

There'll definitely be several more updates before it starts hibernating, though. :)

Thanks, I'm glad you're enjoying. [grin]

Angie

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more denial
[info]skeptic7
2008-10-31 11:16 pm UTC (link)
Still in the denial stage, Liam can have some logical reasons for his distress. There are probably a lot of horror stories out there about missing people: torture and snuff films, illegal brothels, labor camps, vivisection labs, and murderous sadists. Then there is the kidnapping for information scenario, and the crazy villian with a grudge against Liam scenario, and .....
Liam is denying emotional involvement, not logical sensible concern. He needs a body slave for social purposes. He needs a secretary to help with business concerns and meetings. He rather enjoys the regular sex. Liam would have to spend much time briefing a new body slave. Liam could have Johnny act as his body slave, but then would need to find someone else to fulfill Johnny's tasks. WIthout any emotional attachment at all, Liam has many reasons to want Orlando back, alive and safe and able to fulfill his many duties. It has nothing at all to do with love, or attachment, or codependency, or unseemly passion; just a reasonable evaluation of Orlando's competencies and knowledge.
Retrieving Orlando would prevent Liam from having to spend a couple years training a new body slave, and wrecking general havoc on the kidnappers would only enhance Liam's reputation in the business world and among his social class. There are all sorts of logical reasons behind Liam's strenuous efforts in retrieving his property. :).

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Re: more denial
[info]angiepen
2008-11-01 04:29 am UTC (link)
Retrieving Orlando would prevent Liam from having to spend a couple years training a new body slave, and wrecking general havoc on the kidnappers would only enhance Liam's reputation in the business world and among his social class. There are all sorts of logical reasons behind Liam's strenuous efforts in retrieving his property. :).

Liam's very pleased that at least one person understands why he's reacted the way he did. Humph.

;D

Angie

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[info]january_snow
2008-11-01 01:15 am UTC (link)
what a horrible world but i'm impressed by your imagination. looking forward to finding out what's going to happen next.

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[info]angiepen
2008-11-01 04:30 am UTC (link)
Thanks, hon -- more soon. :D

Angie

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[info]ireth06
2008-11-01 04:07 pm UTC (link)
I love the comments (and your answers) just as much as I like this chapter!
You've really made a lot of people think about all that is happening. (including me)

Brilliant chapter sweetie!
I'm looking forward to more!
*hugs*

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[info]angiepen
2008-11-02 10:34 pm UTC (link)
I love talking about writing, whether mine or someone else's or writing in general, so having so many people make cool comments and ask thoughtful questions that I can comment back to is awesome. :) Glad you're enjoying all of it. {{}}

Angie

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[info]slave_o_spike
2008-11-03 12:26 pm UTC (link)
Once again, the flashbacks show us how Olri fits into Liam's life. Not just a pretty face, but someone who Liam can rely on.

This is so good (and I'm still loving Thewlis).

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[info]angiepen
2008-11-04 07:05 am UTC (link)
Thanks! I'm liking Thewlis a lot too, and I'm not really a fan of his. [laugh/duck] I got a lot of the core cast here from Kingdom of Heaven (except for Johnny) and Thewlis seemed like a good guy to play the PI. He's turned into a pretty cool guy, though. I'm glad you like him too. :)

Angie

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[info]illuminated_sin
2008-11-07 03:00 am UTC (link)
Oh, I hadn't even thought about that aspect of it. The business espionage thing would be a good and obvious excuse for Liam to continue pursuing Orlando and his slave-nappers (regardless of his REAL reason for wanting Orlando back) without it appearing unseemly. Good thinking. ;)

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[info]angiepen
2008-11-07 07:00 am UTC (link)
What? You're saying it's just an excuse...? o_O

;D

Angie

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