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Fic: A Lost Boy, Chapter 12
Title: A Lost Boy
Author: AngiePen
Pairing: Liam Neeson/Orlando Bloom, minor Liam/Johnny Depp, plus a few other pair-ups among the supporting characters.
Rating: NC-17 overall
Summary: Slave Orlando's been taken and the kidnappers aren't interested in ransom. And of course Master Liam's thundering rage is only at the personal insult, that someone would disrespect him by daring to touch his property.
Disclaimer: I don't own anyone you recognize. I know nothing about their social lives or sexual activities, more's the pity. This is fiction, period. It is done as a labor of love and I make no money from it.
Notes: 1) Set in [info]poisontaster's Kept Boy universe -- FAQ here. See Chapter 1 for more notes.

Previous Chapters: One, Two, Three, Four, Five, Six, Seven, Eight, Nine, Ten, Eleven



[Two Years Ago]

Orlando hung up his master's suit jacket and put the hanger on the end of the bar, with the other things that needed to go to the cleaners. Master Liam had his trousers undone by the time Orlando turned back around; Orlando helped him off with them, holding the waistband low while his master stepped out of them, then hung them up next to the jacket.

It'd been obvious on the ride home that the Master wasn't overly pleased by how the review had gone. Heck, it'd been obvious earlier than that -- the project manager and senior engineers had been full of excuses for schedule slip. And then they'd wanted extra money because some of Master Liam's employees had requested additions and changes by talking directly to the programmers rather than going through contracts. The work had been done, a list of little easy changes that'd added up to quite a lot, not even counting the necessity for additional documentation and testing, and the contractor was expecting payment after the fact for changes no one with any authority had authorized.

Master Liam was angry at the contractors for the schedule slips, and at his own people for being idiot bit-heads with no concept of how business worked. He was tense and frustrated, and the quiet but intense working-over he'd given his own management team after the review hadn't helped much.

Orlando unbuttoned his master's cuffs and slid the shirt off his arms. He tossed it aside to go down the laundry chute later, then took a few moments to massage his master's shoulders. They were solid with stress, and just rubbing didn't help much.

His master patted his arm and shrugged him off, then headed into the bathroom to wash up a bit. Orlando stripped down as fast as he could, then went over to the banded chest to one side of the dressing room and got out a riding crop. He took it into the bedroom and knelt down on the carpet in present position with the crop laid across his palms.

A couple minutes later, Master Liam came out and stopped, then said, "You always know what I need."

"Yes, Master." Orlando didn't bother to try to hide his smile, although he kept his eyes on the floor.

His master grasped Orlando's upper arm and had him stand, still holding the crop. He took Orlando's face in both hands and kissed him, long and hard, the kind of deep, possessive kiss that always melted Orlando's bones. The hands pushed up into Orlando's hair, and then wandered. By the time Master Liam straightened up, his hands on Orlando's back and ass were the only things keeping him on his feet.

His toes left the floor and the Master carried him over to the big bed, leaning in for half a dozen more short, pecking kisses while he walked. He set Orlando down onto the mattress, then took the crop and set it aside before turning him over onto his stomach.

Orlando felt his master's weight on his back, pressing him down, and he squirmed with pleasure, just enough to feel some friction between their bodies. He loved the feel of it, of being completely surrounded and compressed. He wasn't small, but his master was so much bigger, both taller and broader, and when he lay on top of him, whether Orlando was facing up or down, he felt perfectly safe and protected.

Master Liam ground down into him, pressing them together skin-to-skin from shoulders to toes. Orlando arched his back as much as he could, pressing his ass up against his master's hardening cock, shifting back and forth just a little until it fit into his cleft. He felt his own erection swelling against the rough cotton of the bedspread, and let out a soft moan of pleasure.

His master's teeth bit down on the swell of Orlando's shoulder and his moan took a higher note of need. He felt the sting down into the muscle, and knew he'd have a bruise there for days, his master's mark in his skin, so much more personal than the brand he shared with every other slave. That bite was his master's and it was only for him, reminding him whom he belonged to with every aching throb.

Orlando felt his wrists clasped and pushed up to the headboard. Master Liam whispered, "Hold on," into his ear. He grabbed two of the smooth wooden bars in his hands and moaned, "Yes, Master." Then, "Master...!" when he felt the warm, solid weight leave his body.

"Hush. Breathe for me."

He took a deep breath and then the tip of the crop came down on his ass.

Orlando cried out, then bit his lip and squirmed when his master's hand came down and rubbed away the sting, leaving only the heat. Another smack, this one on his other cheek, and another rub. His shoulder, right over the already-burning bite, then a rub. His ass again, crossing one of the first swelling lash marks, then one thigh. His ass again, then high on his ribs. The sting and burn and pressure and heat spread across his body, until he could feel the currents in the air moving over his super-sensitized skin.

When every exhale was a pained, needy moan, the crop stilled. Then two slick fingers shoved into his ass, the burning stretch in his hole matching the swollen burn all around it. Orlando reared up, still holding onto the bars of the headboard but pushing his ass up in wordless begging.

"Do you feel me?" His master pulled out his fingers and pushed in with his solid, slicked cock.

"Master! Yes! Hot!"

"You feel the burn?" Master Liam wrapped his arms around Orlando's chest and pressed tight against him, pushing in with tiny thrusts of his hips.

"Yes!" Orlando sobbed, pushing backward as well as he could, stretched between his crushing grip on the headboard and his master's solid arms in the middle and Master's hard cock pinning him to the mattress. It burned wherever his master touched him, like his skin was howling its need in flaring nerves.

"You're so hot, red and swollen and hurting and still wanting me," his master snarled, pulling back and then pushing in hard.

Orlando gave a pained gasp, then moaned, "More, need you!" He wriggled as much as he could, rubbing his stinging back against the coarse hair on his master's chest. He wanted to feel every bit of him, skin and hair and teeth and fingernails and every barely-too-tight thrust of his cock.

Master Liam pulled him to his knees with a rough yank and thrust deeper. Orlando shouted in pain, then babbled more begging nonsense.

"You need this as much as I do."

Before Orlando could even manage a panting agreement, his master bit him again, this time on the side of his neck, right over his slave brand. The pain whiplashed through his body and he spasmed with pleasure, howling into the pillow while pumping come into the bedspread without his cock ever having been touched. He felt his ass clenching around his master's cock and it only took another handful of quick thrusts before Master Liam filled him and collapsed down onto his back.

In the boneless floating after orgasm, Orlando's back hurt a lot more than it had while his master had been either beating or fucking him. His stretched ass burned more too. It made him want to squirm, to try to find a more comfortable position, but it also made him feel more owned, more a possession of his master's than he felt at any other time. That burning ache, from shoulders to calves and deep inside, would remind him for days that the man he loved more than anyone in the world owned every bit of him, and right then he'd rather feel that pain than anything else he could think of.



[Today]

Marton ran the numbers and frowned. Expenses had been higher than he'd projected when he'd first come up with the plan; he'd needed more help, and the second facility had been a quick addition when the third target had gotten stubborn. That'd been expensive, and set him back almost fifty thousand so far.

When he first started, it'd never occurred to Marton that there might be any slaves who didn't want to get away from their owners. Once he ran into it, it was obvious, and he'd wanted to smack himself in the forehead for not thinking. There were slaves who had it pretty good and knew it, and didn't want to take the chance of ending up somewhere worse, and there were slaves whose situation was shit but who were more afraid of their owner than they were of anyone or anything else, definitely including Marton himself. A longer, more intense approach was needed to break down both kinds.

And then there were the ones who just never got with the program no matter what he did. For them, there was the black market. Marton didn't like selling to them; they were liable to be raided at any time, which could end up leading back to Marton, and besides they paid for shit. Half their "slaves" were kidnapped straight off the street without ever having been through Commerce in the first place. After all, who was going to believe a slave who claimed to actually be a free person? Fake up the brand pattern, lock a collar on them and there you go -- instant slave, at least so far as the kind of people who patronized the black market were concerned.

Marton avoided selling to them when he could, but so far he'd had to sell four in that direction. Financial losses there, hardly worth the cost of processing. Although with the last one he'd recognized the futility of it right away and sold the kid within a week of pulling her chip out; she was practically catatonic by the time Marton had unloaded her and good riddance.

That was the real trick of it -- choosing the right targets. You really couldn't tell without interaction, though -- some of the ones who'd absolutely insisted that they had to go back to their owner had been bruised up, so what else were you supposed to look for? -- and talking to a slave and then letting it go on its way was dangerous. If anyone noticed the people who struck up conversations with random slaves out by themselves, and put it together with the slaves who "ran away," things could get awkward.

Didn't matter anyway. Marton figured he could make his goal with just two more. Even cutting their Commerce contact in for a bigger slice, he could write some bigger paper on the next two, hit the mark and get out. If the boys wanted to stay around and keep going, that was up to them -- Anderson was the only one who'd ever met the Commerce rep so they could work for him. Or sort it out among themselves; Marton didn't care.

He'd been in it long enough, and the air was starting to feel twitchy. He'd always known he wouldn't be able to do this forever, had never wanted to do it forever, and there was a feeling under his skin like something was closing in. Definitely time to get out. Marton had plans, and they involved getting out of the Empire with a huge stash of cash. Retirement was looking better and better.

Next Chapter: Chapter Thirteen



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[info]liriel1810
2008-11-07 01:57 am UTC (link)
Oh dear. That's looking very scary for Orlando. I really really hope Marton doesn't sell him on the black market. I don't think he'd survive that.

Can you feel the noose tightening around your neck, Marton? *yanks it* You cannot escape, you will be caught, and then you'll get your just reward!

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[info]angiepen
2008-11-07 07:08 am UTC (link)
I really really hope Marton doesn't sell him on the black market.

I hope not too. [leans on you] That'd be bad, definitely. And yes, like most rats, Marton can sense when the ship's getting ready to sink and has plans to bail out. :/

Angie

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[info]gypsy_atavari
2008-11-07 02:11 am UTC (link)
I'm getting more twitchy about the prospects of Orlando getting out of there with the most minimal of damage.

Where's the cavalry?? Though I do love the tension and gnawing what if. Hehehe.

Thanks for this new update. :)

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[info]angiepen
2008-11-07 07:12 am UTC (link)
The cavalry's busy trying to figure out which direction to ride off in! [flail] It's taking them a while to get it, but at least that does mean a lot of tension and what-if. [grin/duck] Thanks!

Angie

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[info]amygirl
2008-11-07 02:57 am UTC (link)
Hmmmm....that first part is just...hmmmm....

And the second...oh dear...oh dear...oh dear...

Still loving this!

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[info]angiepen
2008-11-07 07:15 am UTC (link)
I knew the first bit wouldn't be everyone's cup of tea. {{}} It's not a huge part of the story but it is part of their relationship (like it wasn't complicated enough before [cough]) and I wanted to get it in there.

I'm glad you're still enjoying. :D

Angie

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[info]amygirl
2008-11-07 10:40 am UTC (link)
My Hmmmms were good ones.... ;-) I honestly don't really get into that but if it's well written and is included as more than just PWP and serves the actually story then I'm fine with it. This not only was well written and definitly showed off the plot but it was hot to boot. It works because it's not the sole reason for the fic but compliments and strengthens stuff mentioned/show elsewhere.

Just wonderful.

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[info]angiepen
2008-11-07 10:50 am UTC (link)
Okay, coolness -- I was afraid you'd been a bit icked out. :D Thanks, hon!

Angie

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[info]amygirl
2008-11-07 05:34 pm UTC (link)
Nah I'd never leave a comment like that on someone's fic. I know where my back button is if I don't like something... ;-)

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[info]weepingnaiad
2008-11-07 03:40 am UTC (link)
The first part was so hot and truly illustrated how much they both care for each other.

And the next? *shudders* OMG, I hope that Marton doesn't sell Orli to the black market! And, yes Marton... the noose is closing in! I hope it snaps closed before Orli is permanently damaged.

*hugs*
WN

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[info]angiepen
2008-11-07 07:17 am UTC (link)
The first part was so hot and truly illustrated how much they both care for each other.

Thanks! I'm so glad you liked it! :D

And yes, Marton senses that noose closing in and is working hard to escape it. We'll have to see whether that works or not. [innocent humming]

Angie

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[info]mistry89
2008-11-07 03:47 am UTC (link)
So, that confirms it, I think - not a long-term plan for Marton and so he is unlikely to be the only one with this kind of scheme. Which makes it trickier.

If just two more, does that mean for sale (frex, Ben and Orlando) or two more snatched (in which case Liam may have a chance)?
I wonder if the Get Out Of Empire plan is the weak bit for Marton - if there is a good "retirement home" then perhaps tracking backwards from there is a viable option for the hunters?

Sorry, as usual I'm speculating like fury (and thoroughly enjoying the story ... and the possible scenarios ) *g*
Thank you!

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[info]angiepen
2008-11-07 07:21 am UTC (link)
To me, the idea of going in with a scalpel -- or an exacto knife, or a box cutter -- and getting the chip out was always an obvious move for anyone who doesn't want Commerce to be able to find a particular slave, so it seemed inevitable that there'd be multiple people or groups doing it, for various purposes. The main question now is just how many people or groups are actually stealing slaves, and on what scale?

And two more means two more snatched, not just two more sales, so there's some more time, but not a whole lot. [nod] I probably should've made that more clear in the second bit. :/

Thanks for commenting! :D

Angie

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[info]ellie_pierson
2008-11-07 04:51 am UTC (link)
Loved the first part. Very hot. The second part made me twitchy too. I'm still afraid for Orlando.

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[info]angiepen
2008-11-07 07:22 am UTC (link)
I'm glad you liked the first part -- thanks! :D

And yes, things are getting tight in the "today" part. [nods and pets Orlando]

Angie

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[info]skeptic7
2008-11-07 06:13 am UTC (link)
I didn't like the first section as well as the rest of your work, I don't like pain with my porn. The second section is wonderfully scary. Black Market and cutting losses. Thanks for the new post, I hope NaNo is going well for you.

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[info]angiepen
2008-11-07 07:24 am UTC (link)
I knew the first part wouldn't be a hit with everyone, but I wanted to get it in there anyway. I'm glad you're still enjoying, despite that. :D

NaNo? Oh, right, I'm supposed to be working on NaNo! [head-slap]

Seriously, since coming home from the cruise I've been in this weird transitional zone, trying to catch up on at-home stuff and sleeping a lot. I definitely need to get back to the NaNo story before I'm ridiculously behind. :P

Angie

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[info]realm_of_ylith
2008-11-07 07:52 am UTC (link)
I'm not so much into the master/slave scenario (like kinkwise) but I luuuuurve me some roughsex. hahahaha So yay, I liked the pronz. Bring on the pain baby, sex doesn't have to be comfy to be fun. *grins*

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[info]angiepen
2008-11-07 08:56 am UTC (link)
Glad I hit one of your kinks. :D

Angie

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[info]anne_squires
2008-11-07 08:08 am UTC (link)
I absolutely adored the first part of this. I think it underscores a point that has been made before. Orlando and Master Liam are perfect for each other. They both meet each other's needs in very essential ways. And contrary to this society's expectations, I just don't think you can interchange one slave for another, or one master for another and can get the exact same result. It's like they are made for each other, and any substitutions just won't fit. Not to mention the hotness factor. This first section hit my kinks big time. Just exactly my cup of tea.

The second section has me more nervous than ever for Orlando. Man, the tension is high... (flails and flails about)

So, is there one more post before this goes on hiatus?

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[info]angiepen
2008-11-07 09:00 am UTC (link)
You're right, they fit each other pretty much perfectly. [nod] And no, Liam can't just swap in another random slave with the same skills and kinks and have it work, the way this society says it should. I mean, okay, it might work, but it wouldn't be the same. It's like substituting a vitamin-and-mineral-fortified protein bar for a five-course gourmet meal. They might be equally nourishing, but there's just something special about the second one. [wry smile] I'm glad you enjoyed. :D

Two more chapters before hiatus -- I finished up through Fourteen on the 31st.

Angie

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[info]illiadri
2008-11-07 08:44 am UTC (link)
Ah ahm verrah unhappah. *makes pouty unhappy face*

I now have to go to work. After reading that *points upwards* And I don't mean the present day bit young missy. How am I meant to work? How am I meant to concentrate? Thank God it's Friday for if I read it again I may have to spend the entire weekend in my bunk.

Supremely guh-worthy, really. I adored it and must read everything else.


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[info]angiepen
2008-11-07 09:03 am UTC (link)
Ummm, at least it'll give you something pleasant to think about while you're working...?

Thanks! [grin]

Angie, hiding ;D

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[info]gypsyluv
2008-11-07 12:36 pm UTC (link)
*thud*

That was me dropping dead with shear pleasure from that first part! That hit all my buttons and more! *ovary explosion!*

And for the rest... (was there more? hehehehe) *tesasing*

Marton feels Liam breathing down his neck! LOL!
I want Liam to find him and beat the living s**t out of him then they can throw his arse in prison!

Thanks for the update! I felt horrible last night but wanted so badly to look and see if this was up yet... but I gave in and went to bed early. So I just HAD to look this mornng and WOW! am I ever glad I did!

I think I'm gonna read that first part over again now.
Hugs and squishes you!
Carla

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[info]angiepen
2008-11-07 12:47 pm UTC (link)
Thanks! Always glad to push a few buttons. :D

And seriously, Liam's having dreams about beating the living shit out of whoever took Orlando. :/ I'm trying very hard to manage it so he eventually can. [crossed fingers]

Angie

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[info]anobtuselife
2008-11-07 02:35 pm UTC (link)
Well, just...guh! (but in an ever so good way!) Oh, my, my... ;-)

Although I've been quite remiss in commenting, I just wanted you to know how much I've been enjoying this (and you were such a dear to keep posting while on your trip!). I'm most definitely (and eagerly!) looking forward to more!

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[info]angiepen
2008-11-07 11:55 pm UTC (link)
I'm glad you've been enjoying all along, and thanks for commenting now. :D

Angie

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[info]jayfray18
2008-11-07 02:45 pm UTC (link)
Wow, what a start! That was hot, and illustrated just how much they both need each other, not just a master/slave realtionship where the slave is sold at the drop of a hat (rather like Chad), but a real partnership, both providing what the other needs with genuine affection.

And then the second part. Again wow, but not in a good way! Poor Orlando, just hope Master Liam can find him in time, if not, before too much damage has been done. And maybe Paul will be found as well? Hopes anyway!!!!

Excellent update.

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[info]angiepen
2008-11-07 11:56 pm UTC (link)
Yes, Liam and Orlando fit perfectly in so many ways. :)

About the second part, all hopes are gratefully received. The boys need all the help they can get. ;D

Thanks!

Angie

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[info]ireth06
2008-11-07 06:21 pm UTC (link)
The first part was not really my cup of tea but if it's with mutual consent it's a different story. This says so much about their relationship. A very necessary little snippet of their lives. *nods*

The second hads me cringe once more ... Thinks frantically for something to slow Marton down in selling Orlando so Liam can find him!

I'm glad there will be two more updates to look forward to .. for now! *g*

Hope the Nano's working out ...

Thanks for sharing! *hugs and kisses*
Mar

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[info]angiepen
2008-11-07 11:59 pm UTC (link)
I'm glad you liked the first bit for its contribution to the character and relationship development, even if that particular kink isn't your thing. I was hoping it'd work out that way. :)

About Marton, he's not packing his bags yet [grin] but he's definitely got his eye on an approximate wrap-date. We'll have to hope the boys can work fast. [pokes Liam and Thewlis]

Don't ask about NaNo.... [headdesk] I haven't written a word of fiction since I got off the ship. I hate transitions, seriously. I'll have to see how much I can pull out this evening. :/

Thanks back for commenting! {{}}

Angie

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[info]ireth06
2008-11-08 12:01 am UTC (link)
*sends some good vibes!*

Now write ... please.. the sooner we get more Lost boy the better!
*grins*

Good luck!

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[info]angiepen
2008-11-08 12:04 am UTC (link)
Well, NaNo lasts all of November, no matter how much or little writing I do. [duck] The only way I could get back to this any more quickly would be if I actually finished Swords and Shadows before the end of the month, which would be great but I'm not putting any money on it. ;D

Thanks! All offerings of luck gratefully accepted!

Angie

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[info]ireth06
2008-11-08 12:18 am UTC (link)
I'll just have to read your icon one more time ... maybe even twice ... then ...! LOL!

*hugs*

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[info]vienna80er
2008-11-07 06:25 pm UTC (link)
First part of this chapter: majorly hot and simply wonderful.

Second part: The organization is way bigger than I thought. I'm worried for our Orlando.

Thank you for sharing another great chapter. :)

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[info]angiepen
2008-11-08 12:01 am UTC (link)
Mmmm, Chrissy.... I've been trying hard not to include any more non-Americans in this story, after I grabbed the folks I wanted from KOH, but it's tough sometimes. [tries frantically not to think of roles for Christian]

Anyway. [cough] I'm glad you liked the first scene; it was fun to write. :D About the second, yeah, Marton couldn't have pulled this off alone, or even with just one or two henchguys. Or rather, he could have, but he'd have ended up selling a lot more slaves to the black market, and Marton already explained why that sucks.

Thanks for commenting!

Angie

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[info]ai_hen
2008-11-07 11:14 pm UTC (link)
The first part made me squee but the second part made me very scared.
I love how close Liam and Orlando are and how well they know each other. But I am getting a bit pessimistic about Orlando , this seems a really big organization. How on earth will he get out. And will Paul ever be found?

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[info]angiepen
2008-11-08 12:03 am UTC (link)
It'll take a lot of effort on everyone's part for Orlando to get out, definitely. [nods, pets Orlando] And Paul's a whole different kettle of rutabagas; he's been gone for a couple of years, and finding him's going to take a miracle or three. :(

I'm glad you liked the first scene, though. :D Thanks!

Angie

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[info]adrian_turtle
2008-11-08 02:41 am UTC (link)
I really loved the way the first scene showed the relationship between Liam and Orlando. It's tempting to think of Liam as a "good" owner, just because he cares about the health of his slaves. It's good to illustrate how different that is from sadism, just as you illustrated earlier what it means for Orlando to consent to sex when he's completely dependent.

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[info]angiepen
2008-11-08 08:13 pm UTC (link)
I'm glad you liked the first scene. :D

And yes, Liam can be tricky to categorize. [nod] He's not a "good guy" like Jeff, as in being clearly an abolitionist -- or any kind of abolitionist for that matter. But he's not one of the whack-jobs like Lord Cruise, or even like the owners who neglect or abuse their slaves less spectacularly than Lord Cruise. Liam takes good care of his slaves, but it's with the same sense of responsibility that he takes good care of his horses. He clearly loves Orlando, but not in a way which makes him question the whole slavery thing, and he has no problem giving Orlando a smack as punishment or correction when he needs it. (Which he hasn't much since he was a kid, but still.) And he's dismissive of -- or just oblivious to -- Margaret's feelings and concerns for her son. In his own view, Orlando is his and he takes excellent care of him, and Maggie should just accept and trust that and get on with her own work.

Liam does have a sadistic streak to him -- he clearly does enjoy hurting Orlando -- but it's not uncontrolled, and he wouldn't really enjoy exercising it on someone who didn't enjoy being on the receiving end. What makes it such a turn-on for him is that Orlando very clearly does enjoy it, and is getting off on receiving the pain just as much as Liam's getting off on giving it. With free partners, he'd play Safe, Sane and Consensual. With slaves, well, that's what a body-slave is there for, but in his case there'd be something missing, something spoiling the pleasure on his own end, if the slave clearly didn't enjoy it too. I don't think he'd personally condemn another owner for engaging in pain-play with a body-slave who didn't enjoy it; he'd see it as just a matter of taste so long as they didn't go so far as serious injury or maiming or whatever. That'd be a self-indulgent waste of a good slave and he'd definitely look down his nose at an owner who'd let their impulses make them forget their responsibilities like that.

Within the context of this verse, he's probably one of the better masters. A slave could do a lot worse, at least. But from our POV in the real world, it's hard to see him as a good guy. I'm glad you're picking up on the subtleties, though, and enjoying the character. :)

Angie

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[info]dragonmad
2008-11-09 05:36 am UTC (link)
Eeep...

Nows I wants more. *pouts*


This is so thoroughly enjoyable. Seriously cannot wait to see the next chappie! XD

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[info]angiepen
2008-11-09 05:42 am UTC (link)
Heh! Thanks, I'm glad you like it. :D More soon!

Angie

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