AngiePen ([info]angiepen) wrote,
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Fic: A Lost Boy, Chapter 23
Title: A Lost Boy
Author: AngiePen
Pairing: Liam Neeson/Orlando Bloom, minor Liam/Johnny Depp, plus a few other pair-ups among the supporting characters.
Rating: NC-17 overall
Summary: Slave Orlando's been taken and the kidnappers aren't interested in ransom. And of course Master Liam's thundering rage is only at the personal insult, that someone would disrespect him by daring to touch his property.
Disclaimer: I don't own anyone you recognize. I know nothing about their social lives or sexual activities, more's the pity. This is fiction, period. It is done as a labor of love and I make no money from it.
Notes: 1) Set in [info]poisontaster's Kept Boy universe -- FAQ here. See Chapter 1 for more notes.
2) This story just passed 50,000 words. [flail]

Previous Chapters: One, Two, Three, Four, Five, Six, Seven, Eight, Nine, Ten, Eleven, Twelve, Thirteen, Fourteen, Fifteen, Sixteen, Seventeen, Eighteen, Nineteen, Twenty, Twenty-One, Twenty-Two



David had a headache and felt like he was about to vomit.

He shuffled along in line with a bunch of other slaves, some old and some young, some calm and some panicking, some beautiful and some who definitely weren't going to end up as body-slaves. On either side of the line there were staffers, guards, handlers -- whatever they were -- scowling at all the confused slaves. They dealt with any behavior they disapproved of quickly, using electrified batons.

Behavior they disapproved of included not moving, moving too fast, moving in the wrong direction, staying silent when spoken to, speaking when not addressed, and yelling or screaming no matter what. Minor infractions got a poke, which delivered a quick shock. It was painful but didn't do any lasting damage, which David learned when the slaves ahead of him held up the line and he got shocked along with them when the guards got things moving again.

At first David had just thought his sick headache was from hunger; he hadn't had any dinner and the meal before it had been... well, a while before, and it'd only been a muffin and a banana. He'd been stuck in a tiny cell after his transfer and left all night, then rousted out in the morning and shoved in with the other new slaves, groggy and frightened and disoriented, with a tiny pin memory on a chain locked around his neck. His first stop had been a station where a Commerce employee -- who looked dull and zoned out, and did his job with zombie-like boredom even first thing in the morning -- took the pin off him and slotted it into his desk unit.

Data scrolled up a tiny screen, too quickly for David to read, but no one asked him to so it didn't matter. The unit hummed, then spat out a small chip, about the size of his fingernail, into a slot. The Commerce drone inserted the chip into some kind of hand unit while one of the staffers with a baton tapped him on the arm.

David flinched back, turning away from the shock. The drone shoved on his other shoulder to keep him rotating until David was looking completely the other way, then pressed the hand unit against his back, right next to his spine at shoulderblade level. David felt something else sting him, then felt his chip burrow under his skin with a sharp, sliding pierce. It sat there stinging and itching. He tried to reach for it out of reflex and got another poke with a wand, even though he couldn't get his hands anywhere near the spot.

The next station, after another wait in the slow-moving line, had a fat pillar with straps bolted to it next to a work table loaded with smoking metal cannisters. David caught a bare glimpse of a long-handled implement with a smaller rendition of the Commerce seal on the end before he was pressed up against the pillar, with his face in a padded depression. He couldn't breathe and tried to struggle, but a padded shell of some kind clicked into place around the back of his head to hold his head still. His wrists were strapped into thick cuffs around the other side of the pillar, so he was hugging it, and two flat straps were fastened around him at shoulder and rib level. It was all done in just a few seconds by multiple sets of hands.

He couldn't get a breath to yell, couldn't fight or struggle. His legs were free to kick, but his upper body was so secure that it stayed still; all his kicking got him was a more prolonged shock. Just as he was sure he was about to black out, he felt something searing cold pressed against the right side of his neck. It held there forever while his heart slammed to escape his chest and his flesh melted around it, then it pulled away. The pressure was gone but the frozen burn remained.

The straps loosened and two sets of arms hauled him away from the pillar and gave him a shove forward, to the back of yet another line. He tried to raise his hand to his neck out of reflex, but every time his hands got above his waist he was shocked, and he quickly learned not to do that. He was gasping for air, dizzy and hurting and disoriented and he fell to his knees on the concrete floor. Half a dozen more baton shocks got him back onto his feet again.

The slaves in this line were all leaning on one another. Most were sobbing in pain, or gasping as they tried not to. There were at least a dozen wet-stained splotches on the concrete around the end of the line where slaves who'd just been branded had vomited and then cleaned it up; David saw one spew his guts a few places behind him, then have a bucket and cloth shoved into his hands.

He considered letting his own stomach go; at least he'd get a few minutes of kneeling down without being shocked for it.

Some time later, his line wound past a station where another Commerce staff person swiped a layer of some cool, stinky lotion or ointment or something onto his neck with a spongy instrument. It looked kind of like the sponge-type paint applicators he'd seen... where? On television, maybe?

Another slow, shuffling wait, with only two people vomiting along the way, and he was directed to strip and drop his clothes into barrels. Shoes, socks, pants, shirt, briefs... he skipped the undershirt barrel because he wasn't wearing one. He skipped the belt, purse, jewelry and miscellaneous accessories barrels too. Everyone else seemed to have more things on them than he did, to be wearing watches or rings or earrings, to have brought along a wallet or a cell phone, pictures or keys. Everything went into the barrels.

He was handed a pair of cheap elastic-waisted shorts and a plain T-shirt, both in bright red, both stamped with the Commerce seal in black, with "SLAVE" curved over the top; the T-shirt had the seal across his chest and the shorts across his butt. There was no question what he was, coming or going, and even if he was stupid enough to try to escape, he'd attract attention wherever he went -- either from wearing bright red clothes that said he was a slave, or from being naked.

Slaves who needed medication were split off into another line. David didn't, so he stayed in the main line.

The next station was food. David got a thick slice of crusty bread spread with something that looked like it was trying to pretend it was butter, along with two apples and a pint of milk. He was pushed along into a bare room, at which point the line dissipated. Most of the slaves were leaning against a wall or sitting on the floor to eat; he crossed his feet and lowered himself down to sit.

The bread was decent, although his mother's was better. He ate carefully at first, afraid it might come right back up again. By the time he was about halfway through, in slow, carefully chewed bites, his stomach felt a little less chaotic. He finished the bread, then opened the carton of milk and took a slug before biting into an apple. It was past its prime, mealy and not very sweet, but it was edible and he discovered he was hungry.

By the time he finished, he wasn't full but he wasn't hungry anymore either. His stomach felt kind of delicate but not actively roiling. That was an improvement and he was willing to live with it. It looked like part of his sick had been hunger.

His head still ached. He wished he dared ask for something to take for it, but he knew instinctively that that'd be an incredibly bad idea.

A few minutes after he'd finished, a staff-guard-whatever came by and tapped him on the shoulder, then pointed with her baton to another door, this one with a huge trash barrel next to it. David climbed up to his feet and headed over to it, dumped his trash and passed on through. On the other side of the door was another line.



Mr. Duncan wasn't actually an awful owner, as owners went. At least not yet. He fed Kevin the same meals he ate himself when he was home, and let Kevin raid the fridge when he wasn't. The alcohol was off limits, but that wasn't exactly unusual, and that soon after being bought, Kevin wasn't stupid enough to try to sneak any.

His new owner didn't try for sex, either. Of course, he wasn't supposed to, but Kevin knew that didn't always stop them, so having an owner who followed the rules was good.

The work wasn't hard, either. Once he learned where everything was and how Mr. Duncan wanted things done, Kevin could finish his work, the secretary type stuff and the chores both, by early afternoon. He waited a few days, just in case there were any gotchas lurking around, then, after one of the most boring weeks he'd ever dragged himself through, he decided to get to work on contacting that Lord Neeson guy.

Kevin spent another four days' worth of leisure time searching for one of the free-anon e-mail sites. He found a fresh one, and created an account. The feds stomped on those sites as soon as they found them and there was no telling how long this one would last; Kevin could only hope it'd be around long enough for him to get his business done. If not, he'd find another one and continue, hoping his Lordship was smart enough to catch on when some new mail ID wrote to him and picked up their conversation.

Dear Lord Neeson, [no sense not being polite, at least to start]

I'm a slave who was stolen. While I was held by the thief, I met another stolen slave who said he belonged to you. He said his name was Orlando, and that you'd want him back. If he was telling the truth and you do, write back and we can talk about terms.

He thought about it for a few minutes, then signed it,

Ben

Heck, he wasn't allowed to use that name anymore, so it'd make as good an alias as any.

He read it over again, fixed a couple of typos just because, then hit the SEND button.

Now to find something to do to keep himself from checking his remote mailbox every five minutes.

Next Chapter: Chapter Twenty-Four



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[info]mistry89
2009-01-05 04:11 pm UTC (link)
So there is still enough awareness of Orlando for David to compare the way bread tastes ... hoping he retains enough to see beyond his current misery.
Loathe Ben/Kevin, but Good Things have happened because of Bad Reasons before (and I need to check back to see how much Orlando clocked onto Ben).
Thank you (and Happy New Year)!

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[info]angiepen
2009-01-05 11:51 pm UTC (link)
Poor Ben. [heavy sigh/pets unloved boy] But yeah, he's doing his best for Orlando, even if it's for his own self-centered reasons. :)

You're very welcome, and I hope you're having a great new year too!

Angie

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[info]gypsy_atavari
2009-01-05 04:36 pm UTC (link)
Finally, Liam is about to get break! I'm so excited to see the next chapter. :-)

Happy New Year, btw. :-) Hope the holidays were wonderful for you and yours. :)

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[info]angiepen
2009-01-05 11:52 pm UTC (link)
I've got Liam locked in a closet right now, seriously. ;D

Happy New Year back! We had a nice quiet evening, just the two of us, which is always good. :)

Angie

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[info]ireth06
2009-01-05 04:36 pm UTC (link)
First I was shocked to find Orlando had a new chip ... as far as the world goes he IS David now. But if he ever gets back to Liam, does it matter what the chip says ... they both know who he is right?

I think the headaches are from withdrawl ... commerce will not know he's been given drugs will they? Can't wait what happens when he comes back to his own thoughts again. (maybe he won't, or be too confused to know what to do with them)

I hope he will get a decent owner ... even if he's thirty ... he's still good looking ...

Kevin better get a move on!

Man am I addicted to this. I actually sqeeeeed like a fangirl (which in this case I am!*G*) when this appeared on my flist!
Thanks for sharing!
*hugs*

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[info]angiepen
2009-01-05 11:54 pm UTC (link)
they both know who he is right?

I imagine Liam would recognize him, yes. [cough]

I think the headaches are from withdrawl

Bing! You get a cookie. :D

I hope he will get a decent owner

We'll have to wait and see about that one. [eyedart]

Thanks, hon! I'm glad you're still having fun with this. [grin/hugz]

Angie

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[info]ireth06
2009-01-06 12:01 am UTC (link)
Fun? That too ... If it takes too long for a new chapter I get headaches ...*winks and grins*

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[info]angiepen
2009-01-06 12:05 am UTC (link)
LOL! Well, I'll have to make sure you only get little headaches, then. ;D I'm back on MWF now, or at least that's the plan. I hope that's not too long for you. [grin/crossed fingers]

Angie

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[info]ireth06
2009-01-06 12:06 am UTC (link)
Whenever is fine hun, I just couldn't resist ..
*hugs*

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[info]thetammyjo
2009-01-05 04:45 pm UTC (link)
Ah the plot thickens and we see some of the treatment of slaves beyond the Neeson household. Excellent.

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[info]angiepen
2009-01-05 11:55 pm UTC (link)
I was trying to figure out how a large Commerce center would process slaves, and the only thing that made sense was "cattle call." [wry smile] Glad you're enjoying it. :D

Angie

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[info]dm_wyatt
2009-01-05 05:51 pm UTC (link)
Oh, dear...

Would Ben's info be helpful to Liam at this point? Orlando isn't Orlando anymore... I hate him trying to profit from poor Orlando's plight, but I hope it can be.

Poor Orlando needs to be rescued!



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[info]angiepen
2009-01-05 11:57 pm UTC (link)
Would Ben's info be helpful to Liam at this point?

That's an excellent question. [nod]

Thanks for commenting! :)

Angie

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[info]dm_wyatt
2009-01-06 02:05 pm UTC (link)
I'm glad it will help. I have been reading this even though I don't usually read RPS stories...

The premise was intriguing enough I decided to give it a try and the last few chapters especially have completely drawn me in, so I decided to delurk.

I'm glad you update fairly frequently. I'm very worried about Orlando.

Poor guy's been through hell.

But what would good hurt/comfort be without some pretty impressive hurt?

lol!

Liam needs to rescue him and give him the comfort he so desperately needs. I worry that once he's rescued his recovery won't be an easy one.

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[info]angiepen
2009-01-07 02:18 am UTC (link)
Thank you! I'm flattered that you're enjoying this even though you're not usually into RPS. :D

But what would good hurt/comfort be without some pretty impressive hurt?

Absolutely. [nodnod] Somehow it wouldn't be the same if he'd just sprained his ankle or something. ;D

Angie

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[info]dm_wyatt
2009-01-07 02:00 pm UTC (link)
I do love good hurt/comfort and this more than qualifies...

LOL!

You've really put poor Orlando through hell, but Liam isn't having too much fun either.

I can't wait to see where this is going to go.

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[info]alran
2009-01-05 05:56 pm UTC (link)
Now to find something to do to keep himself from checking his remote mailbox every five minutes.

Exactly like me waiting for an update!

Go on Mr. Neeson, answer quickly.

Thanks.

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[info]angiepen
2009-01-05 11:58 pm UTC (link)
LOL! Yeah, I've had times like that.... [wry smile]

Thanks back!

Angie

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[info]fannishliss
2009-01-05 06:19 pm UTC (link)
but now even tho ben contacted Neeson, orlando's been processed as David! how will they ever find him???



meep!

great chapter again!

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[info]angiepen
2009-01-06 12:00 am UTC (link)
how will they ever find him???

Excellent question. :D We'll have to see. [innocent humming]

Thanks for commenting!

Angie

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[info]ai_hen
2009-01-05 06:21 pm UTC (link)
I am so relieved that Ben hasn't been brainwashed like Orlando has.
Now, hopefully Liam reads his mail.

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[info]angiepen
2009-01-06 12:00 am UTC (link)
Yes, Ben definitely acted to avoid that. [nodnod] And I'm sure Liam's e-mail doesn't sit around for very long at all. :D

Thanks!

Angie

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[info]stormatdusk
2009-01-05 07:05 pm UTC (link)
i really can't wait to read all the comfort orlando and liam both need to get/give each other. *agonizes*

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[info]angiepen
2009-01-06 12:01 am UTC (link)
LOL! I'd have to write another whole novel to show "enough" comfort, so far as both of them are concerned. :D But yes, I imagine there'll be at least a tiny bit tacked onto the end. ;D

Thanks, hon! {{}}

Angie

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[info]twicet
2009-01-05 08:55 pm UTC (link)
Great to see more of the process, horrible as it is. I can't really fault Ben for trying to profit from the information. It doesn't sound as if he has had much of a life.

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[info]angiepen
2009-01-06 12:03 am UTC (link)
No, you're right -- Ben has every reason to be looking out for himself and no one else. [nod] He knows that if he doesn't take care of himself, no one else is likely to care much, and that's a best case scenario. :/

Thanks!

Angie

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[info]vienna80er
2009-01-05 11:24 pm UTC (link)
*crosses fingers* Please, let Lord Neeson read the message about Orlando soon. They need each other.

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[info]angiepen
2009-01-06 12:04 am UTC (link)
I'll bet that e-mail will be read RSN. :D And you're right, they do. [pets boys]

Thanks for commenting!

Angie

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[info]dramagirl007
2009-01-06 12:34 am UTC (link)
Yey Ben is helping out. I feel so sorry for Orlando. I hope he is found by Liam soon. Keep up the good work and please update ASAP. :)

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[info]angiepen
2009-01-06 05:28 am UTC (link)
Ben is definitely helping, even if it's for his own reasons. [nodnod] And the plan is to be back on a MWF schedule, so more on Wednesday. :)

Thanks!

Angie

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[info]weepingnaiad
2009-01-06 12:56 am UTC (link)
*meep* Why do I feel that this is far, far worse for Orlando? Commerce is a huge bureaucracy, they're not just going to admit a mistake like re-processing a slave as someone else. I mean, either Liam's going to have to be the one buying David, or I can't see Commerce allowing Orlando to be anything but David. *shakes head*

Poor Orlando, he was on so much mind-altering crap, no wonder he's got headaches. I actually feel sorry for Ben. He's a slave and doing what he can in such a horrid system.

I do hope that Liam gets his note and soon!
*hugs*
WN

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[info]angiepen
2009-01-06 05:30 am UTC (link)
No, you're right, Commerce really isn't into admitting error or backing off on anything. :/

I actually feel sorry for Ben. He's a slave and doing what he can in such a horrid system.

Yes, exactly. He has no power so he's doing whatever he can to help himself. If it's not always nice, well, he doesn't live in a nice world. [pets Ben]

Hugz back!

Angie

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[info]anne_squires
2009-01-06 02:22 am UTC (link)
Parts of this chapter reminded me of what I've heard about the induction process at Nazi concentration camps, especially the branding. Institutionalized dehumanization. Is that the atmosphere you were aiming for? Of course, Commerce doesn't want to kill the new slaves, so they aren't as extreme as what I've heard about the Nazis. Rambling.. Sorry.

I see that David has residual memories. I hope Orlando isn't buried too deeply. It makes me so very sad to read his part of the story. However, I comfort myself that he is at the real Commerce, not on the black market. That seems safer. Still bad, but better than other possibilities. Even though apparently some of the Commerce personnel are on the take, as we saw in the last chapter, I think Commerce is a better place to be than with thieves. There are procedures and regulations in place at Commerce.

I hope the fact that Orlando is at Commerce means he's not a candidate for one of those underground clubs. Btw, remember the club Orlando visited when Lord Neeson went on that trip without him? Could the guy who ran that club be involved with those underground clubs? I remember that Mark said the club they visited that night wouldn't make money, that the overhead would be too high. Just wondering. That club seemed like a milder (more legal) version of the underground club Thewlis took Neeson to. Is there a connection?? So, anyhow.. more rambling thoughts.

I actually like Kevin/Ben. He seems smart, and pragmatic. Finally I think there is going to be a break, thanks to him.

But, can Neeson and Thewlis get to Orlando before Commerce sells him?? I think maybe not. I really don't want to see Orlando/David with another owner; but I think that will happen before it's all said and done.

One small typo--
"He fed Kevin the same meals he at himself when he was home..." Ate.

Oh, btw, where I live there is a Commerce Ave. It's one of the major streets in the city. Whenever I drive on it (every day) I think about your fic.

Thank you for this chapter. I hope you have a Happy New Year.

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[info]angiepen
2009-01-06 05:42 am UTC (link)
Institutionalized dehumanization.

Yes, that's it exactly. [nod] Commerce process human beings into commodities. Slaves are things, property, and one is as good as another, given a similar set of characteristics and skills. When I wrote this chapter, I was thinking about the beginning of that process of enslavement, of turning individual people into a mass of property with as little will of its own as possible, as well as the easiest and cheapest way to work the logistics of in-taking that many people. Santa Ana is the county seat of Orange County and I'm figuring they get a lot of slaves going in through that office. Since the slaves aren't considered people, Commerce doesn't have to think about the humane but expensive aspects of individual attention or delicate concern for each person's feelings and sensibilities. The basic message is, "You're just another kind of cattle now. Behave or be slaughtered."

he is at the real Commerce, not on the black market. That seems safer.

Yes, somewhat. It's all relative, of course, but Commerce would rather not waste a slave they can make money on for many years.

That club seemed like a milder (more legal) version of the underground club Thewlis took Neeson to.

Astute observation. :) Yes, there are similarities there. Barone was running a legal club, with a permanent building and all business licenses in order, etc., but he was breaking the law (stretching it a bit in his own view [eyeroll]) to do it. He definitely didn't last long, and he was enslaved himself for violation of Commerce regulations within a month or two of Mark's visit with the boys.

I actually like Kevin/Ben. He seems smart, and pragmatic. Finally I think there is going to be a break, thanks to him.

Thank you. :) I like the prickly little jerk too, although I understand why a lot of people don't. [cuddles Ben]

Typo -- ack! Thanks! Will fix. :D

[hugz]

Angie

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[info]crevette
2009-01-06 04:33 am UTC (link)
SQUEEE!

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[info]angiepen
2009-01-06 05:42 am UTC (link)
:D

Angie

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[info]gypsyluv
2009-01-06 05:30 am UTC (link)
agggh! Johnny or Liam one needs to check the email soon! Like now! *is so excited*

Poor Orli... now he is officialy going to be David... pouts...

On the edge of my seat still!

Love it
Hugs
Carla

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[info]angiepen
2009-01-06 05:43 am UTC (link)
I'm sure someone will check Liam's e-mail RSN. :D

Thanks, hon, and hugz back!

Angie

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A lost boy
[info]argentine65
2009-01-06 05:26 pm UTC (link)
Is amazing how you are describing an unknow world and I am hoping that whatever reason Ben has he will be able to reach Liam. Wonderful and fruitful year for you. Martha

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Re: A lost boy
[info]angiepen
2009-01-07 02:16 am UTC (link)
I started out writing science fiction, so I have some practice building worlds. [nod] I'm glad you're enjoying it -- thanks!

Angie

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[info]amygirl
2009-01-07 02:37 am UTC (link)
Oh dear...oh dear...oh dear... poor Orlando. Things are so confusing for him...but I think there's a part of who he really is somewhere close to the surface (the whole mother's bread thing)

And Ben/Kevin -- I know he's doing it for his own reasons but at least he's stuck to his guns about getting hold of Liam.

Gar...this fic so twisty/turny/twisty.

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[info]angiepen
2009-01-07 12:28 pm UTC (link)
He's definitely still confused about what memories are which and what they mean and how it all fits together. [nod] It's going to take a lot of sorting out eventually.

Re: Ben/Kevin, right, help is still help, no matter the motive behind it. [nod]

Thanks, hon. :D

Angie

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[info]lapillus
2009-01-07 03:05 am UTC (link)
OH, oh, changes (for the better) are so close I can just taste them.

*looks forward to more soon*

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[info]angiepen
2009-01-07 12:29 pm UTC (link)
Getting there. At least, there's a shadow on the horizon that might be the approaching cavalry. ;D Thanks for commenting -- more in a few hours.

Angie

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